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zxc098
05-22-2012, 10:08 PM
~BHM, Revenge, Stuffing, Dom, ~MWG -

Poker Night
by zxc098

Chapter One – THE CHIPS ARE DOWN

As I waddled down the snack food aisle of Mega Mart I could feel myself getting short of breath whilst wiping away the sweat from my flushed forehead.

Parking my already heavily loaded junk food pilled trolley to the side; I carefully bent over to reach for another extra large 750g value pack of Triple cheese and bacon flavored potato chips, mindful to not blow the seat of my overly taxed grey sweat pants in the process.

Feeling my over loaded knees begin to ache under the enormous pressure they were under; I quickly stuck out my chubby fat filled arm and grabbed 2 packs.

Feeling my greasey stained white t-shirt riding up in the process didn’t help, as my still extremely full and fat stretch mark riddled lunch time burger belly hung pendulously towards the ground.

“Man why did I eat that fourth triple bacon double cheese burger” I thought as another drop of sweat dripped from my exposed deep belly button to the floor.

Holding onto my keg heavy sore back with my spare hand I heaved myself upright once more, wondering whether I really needed 2 more packets of chips as I tossed them into the already groaning food trolley.

Struggling to reach the trolleys handle bar with my flabby stretched out arms, I continued my journey down junk food alley.

Feeling fatigued from my chip packet grabbing workout I headed towards the checkout, noting with some concern that my trolley couldn’t really carry much more, which in hindsight was probably a good thing as my pudding soft arms had become so void of any muscle that I was struggling to push the trolleys load, let alone my own.

As I waddled along I could feel the exposed fat from my protruding belly press against the trolleys handle bar whilst my growing boy boobs jiggled and bounced with each step.

“If only Dr. Stone knew” I thought whilst thinking of her harsh but true words earlier that morning.

“You need to get real... 498 pounds is no laughing matter!”

“I think it’s time you stepped up your exercise program and diet routine before you blow past the 500 pound mark!”

“Stop sitting on your ass playing video games all day whilst scoffing down junk food for a start!”

BAANNGGGCRASSSHHH!!!!!

Jerked out of my day dream state I could feel my rotund fat body shake as the trolley came to a sudden stop, crashing into another cart whilst I turned a corner.

With my greedy burger grease covered fat paunch mounted on the handle bars from the impact and packets of junk food toppling from my cart to the floor I stood there dumbfounded at what came next.

At first I wasn’t sure, but it did cross my mind as I eyed up her toned bronzed legs, catching only a momentary glimpse of her tightly clad pencil skirt hips and thighs.

“Ooppssie,” said a familiar squeaky baby-like voice from my past and my heart began to race.

“Surely it couldn’t be” I thought whilst my eyes shot towards her face, hoping this petite and obviously fit women hadn’t caught me staring at her figure.

“O…M…G, is that really you. I haven’t seen you in like ages or something!” the pretty girl announced as she brushed away her curly long blonde hair from around her face.

My heart was now near my throat; I couldn’t believe it, what wore the odds of meeting her here.

I wanted to run but in my condition that was hardly going to happen, I had no other choice but to face her.

“um…puff…Hi Tiff, long time no see!” I puffed as my worst fears wore confirmed.

I had just bumped literally into my ex-wife, and she was hotter then ever.

“I’m so sorry; I was just turning the corner and not looking where I was going. You know me I guess, still clumsy,” she giggled whilst readjusting her smartly dressed white office blouse and skirt matching blazer.

As she jostled and jiggled about I couldn’t help but stare at how big and round her boobs had gotten.

“Just my luck, I get divorced and my wife finally gets the boob job I had been pressing her to get for years, typical!” I thought whilst watching her melons nearly spill out.

“Worst of all she probably paid for them with my money from the divorce settlement!” I sighed before wiping away the drool around my mouth.

With darting eyes, I quickly looked away so as to not be caught staring. Too late!

With a cheeky grin Tiffany looked back at my chubby greasy face having managed to contain any accidental boob spillage from her tiny pink lace bra that peeked out from under her white blouse.

“So…um…puff… you’re looking really good…, still working out?” I blurted out before regretting my compliment.

“Of course she works out you big dummy, look at her. She could go full speed on the stair master without breaking a sweat all day, not to mention kick your lard ass in a fight!” I grimaced to myself while desperately trying to not be caught sneaking another peak at her amazing rack.

“Oh thanks, yeah I still go on the odd occasion, you know how it is…um… or I mean… who has the time really these days… um…that is any of us I mean, not just you!” she said with an uneasy tone, whilst trying to not stare at my still trolley handle mounted porker gut.

Truth be told, I wasn’t surprised with her unease. This was the first time she had seen me since our last meeting at the divorce lawyer’s office five years ago.

Since then I had gone from a 190 pound muscle packed collage football jock with six pack abs and turned myself into the obese, sweating, 498 pound blob of butterball fat that stood before her.

I on the other hand although shocked to see her in person, had spent many nights in front of the computer scoffing down packets of potato chips whilst googling facebook images of her in my mother's basement where I now lived.

“Puff…so Tiff, you still working at Burger Heaven or have you found a real job yet?” I smugly questioned remembering how Tiffany hated the fact she worked in fast food.

“Um…no. Why are you looking to score a free meal or something, sure you need it?” Tiffany shot back whilst looking at the grease covered ball of fat which I had just managed to heft from the trolleys handle bars and let droop back towards the ground.

“Heh still sensitive about that subject ah?” I stammered trying to not let the embarrassment her comment caused me to become evident.

"Nah really what are you doing at the moment?" I quickly asked not wanting the conversation to turn towards my obvious 300 pound weight gain.

“Well after we went our, you know separate ways. I went back to college and finished my law degree; I’ve now been working as a lawyer at Butler & White for the last 3 years or so, hoping to get a promotion real soon,” she giggled with pride.

“She finished her law degree, she now works at Butler & White and she’s going to get a promotion, no way!” I thought to myself while tugging at my sweat and grease stained t-shirt in an uneasy effort to hide some of the exposed fat from the underside of my hanging food sack.

“So…what about you…” Tiffany questioned with a raised eyebrow.

“Oh…I um, well um…I’ve actually started work on this knew venture of mine… it’s like um going to be real big, just haven’t finished working out the details yet, but it will be ready for launch later in the year. Its complicated to explain…but I’m really busy you know!” I lied whilst my eyes darted nervously all over, too embarrassed with the truth to make contact with my ex wife’s still emerald green eyes.

“Good try moron, don’t think she bought it though. Did you forget she knows you too well and can spot your nonsense a mile away. Maybe you should tell her you’re a professional gamer who got fired from his last job at the local bakery for stealing and eating too many pies!” I thought to myself as I defensively crossed my chubby Christmas ham sized arms across my pudgy chest.

“Well was good seeing you again, Tiff…I um better get going,” I muttered before being stopped in my tracks.

Sauntering closer towards my trolley Tiffany slowly bent over whilst picking up some of the junk food items that had spilled from my trolley in the crash.

Looking back up with a knowing smile, Tiffany caught me once again starring down her overly tit filled blouse before standing back up, dropping the various packets of Little Debbie’s and Cookie Time Crunch into my trolley with a delicate hand.

“Thirty…Four… Double… J Cup… how big are yours tiger?” Tiffany whispered into my ear while pressing her big boobs into my flabby arm whilst tweaking my left bosom with her sharp glossy fingernails.

“Eeeummrrghh…” I let out with embarrassment before swatting away her surprisingly strong hand and feeling my steadily growing erection press against the bottom portion of my gut.

Taking a few steps back Tiffany placed a hand on her hip and struck a pose while looking me up and down.

Catching her eyes I was only able to hold her burning stare for a minute before breaking away and looking down at the floor which was naturally obscured by my belly.

“You wanna come over tonight?” she asked with a grin.

“Absolutely,” I immediately responded, unable to hide my excitement.

“Great, some friends and I have poker night every Saturday, we usually alternate as hosts and it just so happens one of the girls canceled so were actually one player short… you do still remember how to play right?” Tiffany questioned obviously amused at the excitement in my voice and in my pants.

“Of course I do, I’ve cleaned you out a few times if I recall,” I smugly announced trying to regain some sort of pride in front of my big boobed mega babe ex wife.

“Ha I’ll have you know, I’ve gotten a lot better since then. There’s a reason they call me Big Stack Tiffany, and it’s not because of these,” Tiffany giggled in reply as she hefted her overinflated silicon balloons with both hands.

“Oh man!,” I murmured feeling steam almost come out of my ears as my face blushed red.

“See you tonight, oh by the way my address has changed; here I’ll jot it down for you,” ]Tiffany smiled as she pulled a pen and pad from her expensive looking handbag.

Shuffling back towards me in her stiletto heels, Tiffany pressed the paper against my mountains protruding ball belly before jotting down her new address.

“See you tonight big boy!” she laughed before flicking her long blonde hair in my face and returning to her shopping trolley.

Quickly looking down at the somewhat scrunched up peace of paper I gawked at the address with disbelief.

“110 Manchester Avenue, Parkside Tower – Top Floor”

“No way was this her place, those apartments are like 5 million dollars minimum buy in!” I thought to myself while catching another quick glimpse of Tiffany as she wiggled her extremely toned, tight and round little ass down the aisle before disappearing from sight.

(Continued in post 3 of this thread)

zxc098
05-22-2012, 10:15 PM
Hope it reads easy enough. I'm trying my hand at first person writing and people talking to themselves/thinking to themselves, hence there is lots of "thinking to myself" going on which i turn to itallics.

Not sure how easy it is on the eyes however.

Im sure Britt Reid will save me :D


More coming later on tonight if i can find the time to write.

It's all finished in my head just got to put it into words and on paper so to speak.

Got to go to work now.

zxc098
05-23-2012, 04:07 AM
Chapter Two – MEET THE PLAYERS

Sucking in my fat gut while attempting to button my slacks I quickly regretted eating that second extra large Meat lovers BBQ Pizza with extra cheese crust stuffing for dinner.

With nearly half an hour’s worth of puffing and panting, pushing and prodding I was able to jiggle my fat paunch into the trousers, zipping them tightly before beginning the frustrating task of buttoning up my long sleeved shirt.

“Man my boobs have gotten so big and milky, although not as big as Tiff’s…or have they! I thought with some embarrassment whilst cupping my puffy fat engorged bosoms and giving them a heft before letting them fall back down onto my keg sized gut with a slap!

With a quick spritz of some cheap cologne that I still had over from years ago, I grabbed my sports coat and waddled downstairs to catch a taxi.

Feeling my fat jiggle and wobble with each pot hole the taxi driver hit I couldn’t help but think back to the days Tiffany and I were together.

I was back where we first met in high school. I was captain of the Red Eagles football team and she was just some cheerleader I guess. Being such a natural athlete meant I had the body of a Roman God, if I do say so myself.”

The girls used to stare at my hard body, six pack abs, rock hard pecks, and bulging biceps. Tiffany like most women couldn’t help herself and practically threw herself at me from day one, although if you asked her she would deny it and tell people it was me who chased her for months before we went out. Yeah right!”

Whichever way it happened, we soon started dating and even ended up going to the same college where she began her law degree, which for a time she took very seriously. That was before I started dragging her to the many frat parties and keg nights I would frequent, what a blast”

Eventually with all the booze and partying we dropped out of college and got married in Vegas which is what I always wanted not some stupid Church ceremony like she insisted at first (thank goodness I didn’t give in to her demands that day!).

Time went by and although Tiffany wanted to settle down, buy a home and raise some kids I continued to party, which I guess is how I ended up here.”

I remember how angry she was coming home from work one day as she found me in bed with another woman. Personally I still don’t see what the problem was and if you ask me it was her fault.”

“Had the silly cow done more to please me in bed or get that much needed boob job I had requested from her on many occasions mind you, I wouldn’t have been driven to the arms of another women, one with much bigger breasts at the time”[/I]

“We're here buddy, that’ll be $23.50” the taxi driver said, bringing me out of my nostalgic day dreaming like state.

Struggling out of the back seat I could hear the cars suspension was relieved to be rid of my burdensome load.

Waddling along the paved slate pathway towards the rather grandiose foyer which was lit up like a Christmas tree, I couldn’t help but stare at the flashy sports cars and luxurious sedans parked out front.

Noting with some envy that I would most likely never be able to afford let alone fit into any of these cars unless I dropped some serious poundage, I quickly spotted a rather ostentatious looking Ferrari 575 Maranello.

“Yeow, what a machine, it’s exactly like the one from Bad Boys 2” I drooled.

“Shame some idiots’ gone and painted it hard candy pink,” I laughed before noting the custom license plate.

“TIFFANY”

“Like what you see big boy?” I heard a squeaky voice say from behind.

“Tiff…oh man you look great, I mean hay how’s things,” I nervously stumbled as a laid eyes on my super hot big breasted ex wife.

Kitted out in a tight pair of booty hugging blue jeans which showed of her magnificently toned bubble butt, Tiffany’s massive melons spilled dangerously out of her tight strapless pink boob tube top. What a look!

“Thanks, you’re looking very dapper yourself tonight… so I guess you’ve spotted my ride, wanna go for a spin?” Tiffany giggled as she crinkled her nose, knowing perfectly well that there was no way of me fitting into the tiny sports car.

“Um…oh, nah not now ah, I um…we should really get to the party, wouldn’t want to be rude and arrive late. Who’s coming anyway, anyone I know?” I excused while self consciously tugging at my shirt, making sure my belly didn’t accidently expose itself in front of this gym bunny cutie.

“Um, well you might remember a few people, I don’t know. Don’t worry I’ll make sure to introduce you to everyone,” Tiffany smiled as we got into the elevator together.

Standing side by side with an awkward silence as we headed for the top floor, I couldn’t help but notice Tiffany’s eye’s darting nervously between my protruding pizza stuffed dough ball belly and the sign on the door which read.

“WARNING MAX WEIGHT 1.6 tons”

“How much does she think I weigh, stupid girl…man I want to squeeze and motorboat her boobs so bad” I thought as the elevator came to a halt and opened its doors.

As my belly entered the apartment a few moments before me, I gasped when I finally saw the view.

“Man you can see the entire city form up here, this pad is awesome; how can you afford a place like this Tiff?” I murmured in disbelief.

“Me…haha yeah right, this isn’t my place, it belongs to Ned, Ned Fulton you remember him from high school, right?” Tiffany laughed whilst pacing a delicate hand over her bouncing cleavage.

“Ned Fulton… you mean Nerdy Ned, Four eyes Fulton, the Mayor of nerdville?” I joked before hearing another voice from across the room.

“Tiffany, so glad you made it… this must be your friend, hay I remember you. The football captain from high school, how’s things man, nice of you to join us for Poker night, hope you're hungry we got a buffet set up in the other room so help yourself” ]Ned welcomed in a genuine manner before hugging Tiffany and placing a cold beer in my hand.

“Lucky bugger, cant believe he doesn't remember me beating him up after class” I thought as I watched Tiffany’s boobs press into Ned’s chest.

“Can’t believe you’re hanging with Nerdy Nedy…did that dweeb win lotto or something" I scoffed whilst chugging down my beer and standing next to Tiffany.

“No, actually he worked very hard for all this. Looks like all that time in the computer science lab finally paid off for him. Seriously though he’s a real nice guy, generous to a fault and not a bad poker player” Tiffany replied with some disdain in her eyes for what I had just said.

“Hay girlfriend, your looking fab tonight Chiquita, ahy mami you so sexy,” a voice could be heard coming towards Tiffany.

Bouncing across the room was a rather very voluptuous yet attractive dark haired Latino woman. Naturally I couldn’t help but check out her curves of which she had ample as she made her way over.

I was almost chocking on my beer as she hugged Tiffany before playfully squeezing one of the tit queens giant orbs.

“Honk, Honk I see you bought the puppies again tonight, hopping to distract the boys are we?” the Latino girl laughed whilst Tiffany playfully swatted away her hand.

“Oh hay sorry, this is Eva, remember her from college…” Tiffany introduced with a questioning look.

“Eva…um…oh boy, man you look fantastic,” I blurted out once again, stunned at the phenomenal figure and alluring features this once rather plain Jane college girl now exhibited.

“Oh Hi… yeah nice to see you again,” Eva replied with an obvious dislike for me in her voice.

Just then I spotted another woman who had just joined our little group. Quickly checking her out I soon spotted the obvious heavily pregnant state this young beauty was in.

Dressed in a lose fitting sky blue dress she looked good with her Autumn colored locks falling gently around her v-neck, casually hiding her swollen milk filled breasts.

“This is Amanda, our hostess for the night and Ned’s wife; you’re absolutely glowing tonight Amanda, how long to go now?” Tiffany spoke while taking another sip of her wine.

“Oh thank you so much Tiffany, just another week or so thank goodness. I feel as big as a house, my feet are killing me and my boobs are so heavy and swollen… although I bet you know a thing or two about that,” Amanda joked as the group of girls began to cackle.

“Lucky bugger, how could that dork end up with money, cars, property and a totally smoking babe for a wife. Talk about unfair” I grumbled to myself before heading towards the buffet and grabbing another drink from the free bar.

zxc098
05-23-2012, 04:09 AM
More on its way tomorrow if I find the time.

If you like this story please leave a comment, helps me to continue writing. :)

zxc098
05-23-2012, 06:34 PM
Chapter Three – LET THE GAMES BEGIN

Feeling my butter soft belly press into the sharp corner of the buffet table as I pilled my plate high with an assortment of seafood I couldn’t help but feel sorry for myself.

“Stupid Nerdy Ned four eyes Fulton, what a show off, rubbing his good fortune in my face. Bet he sucks at poker, probably doesn’t even know how to play, what a loser!” I thought to myself whilst munching down on a platter of expensive looking shrimp.

Ever the pig, I quickly scoffed down the platter of seafood, leaving little shrimp for anyone else and licking my fingers clean.

Waddling back to the buffet to refill my plate I was greeted by Tiffany’s cleavage as she bent over the buffet table and picked out an assortment of food for herself.

“Hmm, no shrimp what a shame,” she pouted whilst looking up at me.

“Heh yeah I think that fat pregnant lady ate it all, I saw her with a huge plate before,” I lied whilst leering at my ex wife’s bent over boob spillage.

“I don’t think so silly, Amanda wouldn’t risk eating seafood with a baby only days away…sure you didn’t have something to do with it,”]Tiffany questioned whilst pressing a handful of napkins into my fat seafood splattered paunch.

“Alright everyone lets get this show on the road, let’s play some poker folks!” Ned announced with a strong confident voice, something I would have never expected from the former bully magnet.

As Ned stood in the middle of the room I couldn’t help but notice how different he looked from his high school days.

Gone were the nerdy glasses and the pimply sweaty face, replaced with smart contacts and a crystal clear complexion.

Most impressive however was how he had physically changed. No longer the scrawny weakling I remember ragging on in high school. Ned was now a well built man with defined good looking features and broad shoulders.

Worst of all I suddenly realized how tall Ned actually was. In fact he might even be a fair bit taller then myself, as I now stood with a slight hunch due to the heavy boulder of fat I was permanently carrying out front.

As I waddled towards the solid oak poker table I couldn’t help but leer at Eva’s voluptuously full booty. It was so ghetto and round along with her thick meaty legs, what a figure.

Caught off guard by the sexy Latino as she looked over her shoulder, catching me staring at her behind I was embarrassed to say the least.

“Something I can help you with tubby?” she questioned.

“Why dont we head back to my place and I'll let you find out!" I replied in an arrogant manner before taking a seat next to Amanda and watching Eva scrunch up her face in disgust.

Thinking momentarily back to college as I eased my burdensome load onto a chair I suddenly remembered why Eva disliked me so much. Not only did I use to make fun of her for being a plain Jane but because she was a fat chick.

One particular incident came to mind as the other players seated themselves around the table.

I remembered how one summer down by the college pool me and my football mates snuck into the girls locker rooms, stole Eva’s rather large granny panties and hung them from the schools flag post along with a message that read.

“Who ate all the Pies. Eva!”

In hindsight it was pretty immature especially since Eva ended up being teased for her fat bottom and unflattering panties until the end of the semester; nonetheless I was the man amongst my team mates that day.

Looking around the table I was glad to see that Tiffany had parked herself directly opposite me, allowing me many opportunities to stare down her boob busting top throughout the night.

Next to me sat the rather very pregnant Amanda who kept smiling at me like she knew something I didn’t. More often then not I would catch her looking down at her pregnant pot and then at my fat bloated pig belly which was partially wedged against the edge of the table.

I swear if I didn’t know better she was comparing my globular belly’s hefty size to her own, silly cow, I was nowhere near as big as some pregnant fat chick… was I?

With Ned shuffling the cards and the various people still making small talk I couldn’t help but notice there was still one spare seat next to Tiffany.

Reaching for another handful of Chicken flavored Pringles from the stack of party food and cramming them past my chubby cheeks, my heart suddenly skipped a beat as I saw a somewhat familiar face enter the room.

“No, it couldn’t be… not him, anyone but this guy!” I panicked as the very good looking tall, dark, handsome and well built stranger placed his hands around my ex wife from behind and gently kissed her on the neck causing her to giggle and bounce.

“Eduardo, stop…oh my god, your late…ouch stop that. Here I saved you a seat darling!” Tiffany giggled whilst readjusting her boob tube.

“I’m so sorry everyone I know I’m late, the charity for the kids went longer then expected. I couldn’t just leave!” Eduardo explained in a thick Spanish accent while placing his long dress coat on the nearby clothes hanger.

“Oh sorry, this is Eduardo; he offers his services as a professional Auctioneer for children’s charity events once a month,” [/I]Tiffany explained as she introduced us.

Struggling out of my chair with some effort I could feel my knees winch in pain as I hefted my mountains gut into the air. Supporting my arched back with both hands before balancing my load I quickly realized how the tables had turned.

“Eduardo Gomez, or Eduardo lardo as I used to call him in high school. Man he used to be such a fat kid, I remember shoveling mud into his mouth after school and making him do my home work while I worked out in the gym, what a loser,” I recalled whilst shaking Eduardo’s hand and comparing its firm grip to my own pudgy soft hands.

“Hi Eduardo…puff…nice to meet you,” I mumbled as my mouth was still stuffed with Pringles.

“Nice to meet me, don’t you remember me from high school… have I changed that much, I guess so ah buddy…although I’m not the only one who’s changed around here!” Eduardo joked to the group as he playfully patted my paunch before sitting down next to Tiffany.

“Eduardo you’re so silly sometimes… I guess that's why you married me,” Tiffany giggled whilst her Latin lover placed his arm around her naked shoulder casually.

“Married…what the, no way this once fat slob is married to my hot wife…ex wife.”

My heart was pounding as I collapsed back into my chair I felt my fat boobs bounce and my belly undulate as I quickly realized how the tables had truly turned.

KittyCourtz
05-24-2012, 08:34 PM
Interesting story so far. =)

Mr. Jigglesworth
05-28-2012, 10:06 PM
Yeah really interesting, I can't weight for the revenge, stuffing domination part of this story, since he writes these stories so well:D


Mr. Jigglesworth

kronoman
05-29-2012, 01:33 AM
you write really well! they are funny and sexy at the same time, hope to read more soon, thanks for the work! :eat2: :bow:

zxc098
05-29-2012, 01:43 AM
funny and sexy haha I aim to please :D

I am just finishing up the tank ass storyline as I type so will be returning to this as soon as that is compleated.

Naughty me i shouldnt have posted this so soon, gonna get in trouble with the admins now :eek:

fatgirl33
05-31-2012, 02:40 AM
I am loving this as well, you are a very talented writer and you have set the stage perfectly with these characters - I can't wait to see what happens next!

Brenda

zxc098
05-31-2012, 05:18 AM
thanks Brenda, not sure when i will be able to continue this as I am finishing up the Tank Ass storyline, might take a little while to post an update for this.

Sorry for the drip feed :/

kronoman
06-03-2012, 04:29 PM
I think this story is awesome, cant wait for the next part! :eat1:

VVET
06-03-2012, 09:37 PM
thanks Brenda, not sure when i will be able to continue this as I am finishing up the Tank Ass storyline, might take a little while to post an update for this.

Sorry for the drip feed :/

I REALLY like your stories & following them Thanks :)

zxc098
06-04-2012, 02:25 PM
Thank you very much.

unfortunately i am working on Tank Ass so much at the moment i dont have much time for this story :/

I will return to this however as the entire plot is already more or less laid out so i just got to write it.

Maybe i should quit my job :p

sammybaby
06-05-2012, 01:57 PM
Maybe i should quit my job :p

Do it... ;)

kronoman
06-10-2012, 02:04 AM
would love to see a draft of how this is going to end, this is very intriguing , what would happen next? how it will end? :bow:

zxc098
06-10-2012, 02:26 PM
cant reveal that, would spoil the story.

I will be finishing this dont worry, just will take some time as i have other things going at the moment, mainly work projects and so forth.

sorry.

kronoman
07-19-2012, 02:35 AM
I sense that this plot is going to be epic and super good quality!!

Thanks for all the effort!

zxc098
07-19-2012, 04:48 PM
oh it is, it is!!!

just haven't been able to find the time to write it, i will get around to doing so eventually - sorry for no updates at the moment.

Borghen
07-27-2012, 03:45 PM
Try harder, please.
This story is one of your best so far.

zxc098
07-27-2012, 04:19 PM
try harder lol, yes sir!

Dont have time at the moment sorry, this may need to go into the discarded pile for now.

I am working on something very similar but much shorter.

kronoman
07-28-2012, 04:45 PM
try harder lol, yes sir!

Dont have time at the moment sorry, this may need to go into the discarded pile for now.

I am working on something very similar but much shorter.

Sad to see this go to discarded, but well, I undestand everybody has real life obligations, someday we will see the end to this fantastic idea.

I hope you do more in the BHM, Revenge, XWG, Dom area, you have very cool ideas, and there is a huge shortage of good stories about those subjects.

Thanks for all the ideas and effort! :eat1: :bow:

zxc098
07-29-2012, 04:59 AM
Just started on somthing new tonight, its going to be my best story yet i recon.

Dont worry i will finish this at some stage I'm not done with this fat porker yet but it wont be any time soon i think. I wont be posting the new story untill it's compleated otherwise it might end up like this and then i'll get known as "that guy who never finishes anything" haha

joonam
11-12-2012, 06:37 PM
what about the story you didnt finish it please do it!?