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Old 09-26-2010, 10:01 PM   #33
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I really like this story. It kinda pulls the reader along with the protagonist, even making a case for James' choice, but ultimately surrendering to impulse and desire, much like Debbie herself. Having actual supporting characters always makes this type of story better in my view.
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