Is there any way you can jump past it, and just tease it out in memories / flashbacks etc ... focusing on the impact more than the play by play? Or is it one of those that really needs to be front and centre?
Also: ditto on what Xy said, and I think anybody who writes has hit this sort of block, sooner or later.
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Criticism is so often nothing more than the eye garrulously denouncing the shape of the peephole that gives access to hidden treasure.
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