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Old 03-01-2006, 08:18 AM   #4
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 36
dmaskedfa has said some nice things

Originally Posted by Observer
Yep, three apparent FA's big girl watching makes a nice twist. If Julie isn't already a pkumper she will have to become one just to compete. Some major grammar clean-up was needed on this story, but description and plot development are excellent.

I knew I forgot something!

Thank you for the great feedback, by the way!
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