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Old 03-06-2006, 08:12 AM   #6
Join Date: Feb 2006
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dmaskedfa has said some nice things

Originally Posted by Observer
After merging the installments I realized something. The arrival of Hank, Catherine and Julie was imminent at the end of chapter one.

But in chapter two everyone suddenly leaves for Georgia without them!

What happened?
Since this is my first try at writing a story, I hope you guys will understand as I use the story to work on my skils.

As for you question. The part about the trip to Georgia was suppose to be a flashback.

I think that I am going to put the rest of the story on hold, for now. I hope that guy will help me with some feedback so I can see what I need to work on!
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