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Old 04-11-2017, 01:24 PM   #278
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Originally Posted by strataadvance View Post
I feel like after all these years.You might have Kelly in a good place to be herself.Stand up for herself.And maybe help Gail.Help Mom. And perhaps finish your all time great Magnus Opus weught gain story.Bravo
Thanks for the insight and for recognizing that Gail and mom have their stories intertwined here, too. I take it that in thinking about Kelly learning to stand up for herself that your impression is heretofore she has not been doing that so much. Any thoughts about how that may have happened in this monster-long scene and how the scene is important to the story? How well do you think I pulled it off?
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