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Old 04-19-2009, 10:38 PM   #2
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Not the best story I've read. It had a very good premise but the writing wasn't very unique. It had little to no description and just kept jumping from topic to topic very quickly with little to no transition.

Anyway I hope the original author still chooses to continue with his/her's writing. I could definantly sense some potential with this story.
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