Bellykissangel - by Marty FA (SSBBW, Stuffing, Humiliation, ~XWG) - Page 2

Momo · 08-16-2010, 05:56 PM

After two years away, I'm ready to complete this story.... It is almost finished, expect it within the next week. Two years has been a lot of eating time for Debbie, so I can guarantee her to be sexier than ever.

Gendo Ikari · 08-20-2010, 04:48 PM

awesome news

mollycoddles · 08-20-2010, 08:49 PM

Yay! This is great to hear; I'm really excited!

Giraffes?Giraffes! · 08-25-2010, 06:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Momo

After two years away, I'm ready to complete this story.... It is almost finished, expect it within the next week. Two years has been a lot of eating time for Debbie, so I can guarantee her to be sexier than ever.

This is big news indeed! Write like the wind, my friend!

dweazel · 08-25-2010, 08:06 AM

great news Marty. thought we'd lost you. cant wait for this

ryanpearcy · 09-21-2010, 09:04 PM

I thought another part was going to be posted soon ?

Momo · 09-24-2010, 12:53 PM

Its still on its way. I decided to take it in a different direction. Its kinda indulgent now, but then this is in keeping with the character, I feel.

marlowegarp · 09-26-2010, 10:01 PM

I really like this story. It kinda pulls the reader along with the protagonist, even making a case for James' choice, but ultimately surrendering to impulse and desire, much like Debbie herself. Having actual supporting characters always makes this type of story better in my view.

Fatcollegedude · 07-19-2011, 12:38 PM

I loved this are you still writing more?

Momo · 08-31-2011, 12:59 PM

Would people still like me to?

I did write part three, but I never posted it. It wasn't quite right for this audience.

Ideally I would love it if someone could illustrate this story for me.

In the past few years Debbie has got even heavier. She is also still seething over what happened - is it time for Debbie to have her revenge?

jason_grvin · 08-31-2011, 08:17 PM

I'd love to read more of this. It's one of my favorites.

Gendo Ikari · 09-02-2011, 11:49 AM

Yes please post it here or anywhere, I WANT to read this.

Momo · 09-03-2011, 02:24 PM

OK, well I can post what I wrote if you like... But I have to say, I did write myself into the story as Debbie's love interest... I kinda fell for her as I was writing it!

marlowegarp · 09-03-2011, 11:55 PM

By all means, post! The story as it goes is quite enjoyable.

jimbo021289 · 09-10-2011, 07:27 AM

Please post whatever you have I love this story

Mishty · 05-05-2012, 10:47 PM

Good read! Can't believe I'm just now finding this!

More MoMo! More!

Gendo Ikari · 05-08-2012, 01:56 PM

The anticipation is killing me.

Momo · 06-22-2012, 03:09 AM

I can't quite get it right.

I've written a couple of 'part threes' to it now... and they don't quite work - so they got scrapped.

I definitely like 'bad' Debbie the best. I want to take things up a notch and make her a real villainess. I don't know if others like this element of the second part, but it certainly does it for me. So that is how I think she will go - besides, the comeuppance can be more extreme if that's the case!

Gendo Ikari · 06-25-2012, 08:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Momo

I can't quite get it right.

I've written a couple of 'part threes' to it now... and they don't quite work - so they got scrapped.

I definitely like 'bad' Debbie the best. I want to take things up a notch and make her a real villainess. I don't know if others like this element of the second part, but it certainly does it for me. So that is how I think she will go - besides, the comeuppance can be more extreme if that's the case!

I'm glad to have an update at least. And I LOVE Bad Deb. I hope she gets even more rotten in the third and final (?) act.

09-26-2010, 10:01 PM	#33
marlowegarp I wanna meet that dad Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Valley Village, CA Posts: 1,017	I really like this story. It kinda pulls the reader along with the protagonist, even making a case for James' choice, but ultimately surrendering to impulse and desire, much like Debbie herself. Having actual supporting characters always makes this type of story better in my view. __________________ I should really learn about what people are talking about when they give these numbers. i will guess i am a 69 69 007. - Mergirl

08-31-2011, 08:17 PM	#36
jason_grvin Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Rupert, Idaho Posts: 21	I'd love to read more of this. It's one of my favorites. __________________ *I wish to live in a world where a chicken may cross the road and not have its motives questioned.*

09-03-2011, 11:55 PM	#39
marlowegarp I wanna meet that dad Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Valley Village, CA Posts: 1,017	By all means, post! The story as it goes is quite enjoyable. __________________ I should really learn about what people are talking about when they give these numbers. i will guess i am a 69 69 007. - Mergirl

05-05-2012, 10:47 PM	#41
Mishty aluminum petunia Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Lickskillet Posts: 3,902	Good read! Can't believe I'm just now finding this! More MoMo! More! __________________ And in the odd chance there are any Astronomy aficionados amongst you the North Star is... that one.

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08-16-2010, 05:56 PM	#26
Momo Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: UK Posts: 13	After two years away, I'm ready to complete this story.... It is almost finished, expect it within the next week. Two years has been a lot of eating time for Debbie, so I can guarantee her to be sexier than ever.

08-20-2010, 04:48 PM	#27
Gendo Ikari Smash the World Shell Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: The Castle Where Eternity Dwells Posts: 219	awesome news

08-20-2010, 08:49 PM	#28
mollycoddles Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 191	Yay! This is great to hear; I'm really excited!

08-25-2010, 08:06 AM	#30
dweazel Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 10	great news Marty. thought we'd lost you. cant wait for this

09-21-2010, 09:04 PM	#31
ryanpearcy Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1	I thought another part was going to be posted soon ?

09-24-2010, 12:53 PM	#32
Momo Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: UK Posts: 13	Its still on its way. I decided to take it in a different direction. Its kinda indulgent now, but then this is in keeping with the character, I feel.

07-19-2011, 12:38 PM	#34
Fatcollegedude Junior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 16	I loved this are you still writing more?

08-31-2011, 12:59 PM	#35
Momo Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: UK Posts: 13	Would people still like me to? I did write part three, but I never posted it. It wasn't quite right for this audience. Ideally I would love it if someone could illustrate this story for me. In the past few years Debbie has got even heavier. She is also still seething over what happened - is it time for Debbie to have her revenge?

09-02-2011, 11:49 AM	#37
Gendo Ikari Smash the World Shell Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: The Castle Where Eternity Dwells Posts: 219	Yes please post it here or anywhere, I WANT to read this.

09-03-2011, 02:24 PM	#38
Momo Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: UK Posts: 13	OK, well I can post what I wrote if you like... But I have to say, I did write myself into the story as Debbie's love interest... I kinda fell for her as I was writing it!

09-10-2011, 07:27 AM	#40
jimbo021289 Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: Cecil County, Maryland Posts: 87	Please post whatever you have I love this story

05-08-2012, 01:56 PM	#42
Gendo Ikari Smash the World Shell Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: The Castle Where Eternity Dwells Posts: 219	The anticipation is killing me.

06-22-2012, 03:09 AM	#43
Momo Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: UK Posts: 13	I can't quite get it right. I've written a couple of 'part threes' to it now... and they don't quite work - so they got scrapped. I definitely like 'bad' Debbie the best. I want to take things up a notch and make her a real villainess. I don't know if others like this element of the second part, but it certainly does it for me. So that is how I think she will go - besides, the comeuppance can be more extreme if that's the case!