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Old 01-05-2007, 04:02 AM   #1
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Default i need her

i don't know who she is
but i need her

in my eyes she reads a book
broken, heartless, disillusionment
but never asks

we sit quietly
i stare deep into her eyes with cold, unforgiving expression
a childlike facade
she stares back with a smile
beautifully defiant
truest, unyeilding, chaste
gently, she pulls my head to her chest
we lay together and sleep for hours
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Old 01-05-2007, 04:24 AM   #2
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nice. that was awesome.

i miss writing.
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Old 01-05-2007, 06:54 AM   #3
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still waiting for the 'i'm right here!!' response...



beautiful sir!
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:23 AM   #4
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nice, late-night slightly emo prose. gotta love it! thanks for sharing.

eta: i'm not using caps in this post in solidarity.
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:32 AM   #5
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Sad times T_T

God damn emo-esk Lyrics.

like, I'll pull out an acustic and we can make a love song =O Seriously.
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Old 01-05-2007, 01:05 PM   #6
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Old 01-05-2007, 01:44 PM   #7
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hey thanks guys. i appreciates it. :B

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nice, late-night slightly emo prose. gotta love it! thanks for sharing.

eta: i'm not using caps in this post in solidarity.
hurk. i can't rep you.

p.s. stop jackin mah style yo.
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Old 01-05-2007, 01:45 PM   #8
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*sigh* wanted to rep you but I can't. Great writing!
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Old 01-05-2007, 03:28 PM   #9
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Killer words. When I read that, I imagined it sung to some dark progressive metal a la Opeth or Agalloch.

course at this point nobody knows what I'm talking about ;_;
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Old 01-05-2007, 07:09 PM   #10
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so, mfdoom, who ya talking about? you can tell us. we're good with secrets. secrets told on public message boards for the world to see. we won't tell, promise.
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Old 01-05-2007, 07:59 PM   #11
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haha if only i knew! @_@

i trust you completely. it's not that. haha. though your post reminds me of a rather sobering comment someone once told me. (i was babbling on about how my ex was stalking me by reading my message board posts and he said "well yeah..it's a message board you know...like...where you post messages..for people to read..")

my name is hans by the way. or Hans. either way, really.
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:15 PM   #12
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haha if only i knew! @_@

i trust you completely. it's not that. haha. though your post reminds me of a rather sobering comment someone once told me. (i was babbling on about how my ex was stalking me by reading my message board posts and he said "well yeah..it's a message board you know...like...where you post messages..for people to read..")

my name is hans by the way. or Hans. either way, really.
well, hans. here's the deal: it's me. Now you can relax and won't need to write emo poetry. Instead, you can spend your time working two jobs to keep me a "kept" woman. And you'll need to build a house near the beach. Don't worry, I want a modest bungalow style with a work space and a guest bedroom and a little room for parties, but nothing too fancy. Think "cozy". And since you're still quite young, I'll give ya 4 years or so to do that in. Ok? Great! It's settled!





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Old 01-05-2007, 08:20 PM   #13
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well, hans. here's the deal: it's me. Now you can relax and won't need to write emo poetry. Instead, you can spend your time working two jobs to keep me a "kept" woman. And you'll need to build a house near the beach. Don't worry, I want a modest bungalow style with a work space and a guest bedroom and a little room for parties, but nothing too fancy. Think "cozy". And since you're still quite young, I'll give ya 4 years or so to do that in. Ok? Great! It's settled!





I kid.
damn, you have all the answers babe.

that actually sounds pretty good. good luck getting my lazy ass to work two jobs, though. i'm too busy "expressing myself" after all! D:
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:22 PM   #14
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damn, you have all the answers babe.

that actually sounds pretty good. good luck getting my lazy ass to work two jobs, though. i'm too busy "expressing myself" after all! D:
get to work slacker, you can express yourself when you're dead!*



*Would make a good Thursday song.
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:34 PM   #15
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get to work slacker, you can express yourself when you're dead!*



*Would make a good Thursday song.
yes ma'am. v_v;
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:46 PM   #16
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I like your poem. u_u
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Beautiful poem...

A poem means something different to every person that reads it. If it touches you, you see images in your mind like a painting. It touches your heart and you soul. This one made me wonder...
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Wow.

Holy necrotitis.
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Wow.

Holy necrotitis.
yeah, nothing like being reminded in 2012 of a poem i wrote when in a very 19 year old headspace. hahah, but hey i wasn't bad for a little emo bastard.
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No no, the poem I like. The creeping on it? Not so much. Haha.




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Hey Furious Styles!

Awesome Madvillan Avatar.
Finding a DOOM fan is like finding Waldo.

But is your Halcyon Days message a Megaman Legends quote???

Cause the only thing More obscure than a DOOM fan is a fuckkin Rockman DASH fan!!! like I thought I was the only one on the planet who like both of them things.

I already saw your Lord Zed, if you are an Old school [84] Transformers fan or have watched the Brave series lately I think we are mentally conjoined.
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Beautiful!! I loved it!
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