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Old 12-10-2008, 11:28 AM   #26
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This is a great story, I hope you're inspoired to carry on.
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Old 12-10-2008, 01:39 PM   #27
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This is one of the most intertaining reads I've had in awhile. Thanks for brightening my day!
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Old 12-12-2008, 09:57 PM   #28
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Oh this totally made my night! Thank you for continuing. I can't wait to read more!
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Old 12-16-2008, 02:53 PM   #29
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Great story! I wonder what they're going to do to get out of this one...
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Old 12-27-2008, 11:23 PM   #30
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all I can say is:
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Old 01-04-2009, 11:04 PM   #31
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Chelsea suddenly felt very, very cold. She tried looking as subtly as she could to see where her dress had gone, but it was no use. It was dark out, and her black dress blended right in with the surroundings.

“Well?” One of the security guards snapped impatiently.

“I’m so sorry, please don’t tell my dad or he’ll kill me!” Chelsea exclaimed.

Parker looked over at her. What was she talking about? Chelsea caught his eye for a moment and gave him a look that told him to play along. Parker sighed inwardly. Whatever she was about to come up with had better be good.

“And who’s your dad?” The other security guard, a heavyset, youngish-looking guy asked. Under different circumstances, Chelsea would have spent a good amount of time checking him out.

“He’s, um…with the Cornwall Corporation,” Chelsea said quickly, hoping neither of the security guards would notice she was lying through her teeth. She remembered walking into the hotel and seeing a huge sign that read ‘A Special Welcome to Our VIP Guests the Cornwall Corporation’. Parker still had no idea what she was talking about.

The security guards exchanged glances. Chelsea and Parker held their breath for a moment.

“Well who’s he?” The young security guard finally asked, gesturing at Parker.

“My boyfriend,” Chelsea answered, “That’s why you can’t tell my dad. He’s not supposed to be out here with me.”

Parker shifted his feet. There was no way the security guards were going to buy Chelsea’s story. And even if they did, what was Chelsea going to do when security wanted to escort her back to her supposed father?

“You kids get your clothes on and come with us,” the older security guard said sharply.

Chelsea and Parker fumbled around in the dark for their clothes, only too happy to get away from the looks of the two security guards.

“What are you going on about? Why couldn’t you just tell them we’re with your sorority?” Parker hissed at her under his breath.

“Are you joking? I’d never live it down!” Chelsea whispered back as she tossed Parker’s pants and belt at him.

“Yeah, I guess we both kind of got caught with our pants down…literally,” Parker smirked as they pulled on what they could find of their clothing.

They emerged, slightly disheveled but at least fully clothed, out of the bushes. Chelsea thought Parker looked a bit like a chastised dog - tail between the legs and everything. Convincing enough for a boyfriend caught sneaking around, she figured.

“All right, I should send you and your boy here to go explain things to daddy dearest, but I’m feeling nice tonight. As long as you kids do your canoodling somewhere where it’s not trespassing, it’s fine by me. Just don’t let me catch you back here again. Got it?” The older security guard snapped.

Chelsea nodded vigorously. “Thank you so much! I promise we won’t be back here again!”

She grabbed Parker’s arm to lead him out of the garden, but the young security guard tapped Parker’s shoulder, motioning for him to stay back a moment. Parker’s stomach turned upside down.

“Just for the record, a million guys would kill to be in your shoes tonight, buddy. Nice going,” the security guard murmured with a smile.

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“Where have you guys been?” Renae exclaimed as Chelsea and Parker slunk as nonchalantly as they could back onto the dance floor.

“Long story,” Chelsea answered mysteriously. She figured she could fill her in some time when every girl in Kappa Nu Lambda wasn’t standing around to hear.

Renae shot Chelsea a questioning glance then shrugged, indicating she was willing to wait.

The last song of the night came on just minutes after Chelsea and Parker’s return. Parker, still buoyed by the sexy escapade turned encounter with the law he had just had with Chelsea, wrapped his arm around her waist and twirled her around to face him.

“May I have this dance?” he asked with his best impression of an English accent. Chelsea giggled.

“I thought you didn’t dance,” she retorted, sticking her tongue out at him.

“ Well…for you I will,” Parker answered, drawing Chelsea even closer.

Chelsea brushed her lips lightly against Parker‘s, while he enjoyed the sensation of her light vanilla perfume washing over him. He waited for the inevitable kiss to follow, but it never came. Instead, Chelsea leaped away at the last moment and traipsed onto the dance floor, waving at Parker to follow. He shook his head and walked after her.

Chelsea quickly discovered there was a very good reason that Parker kept himself from dancing. He was one of those rare creatures born with absolutely no natural rhythm, and spent most of the time swaying off beat. It was an adorable effort, though, and Chelsea knew that he wouldn’t have gone onto the dance floor for anyone else. She grinned and ran her fingers across Parker’s soft jaw.

“I know, I know, I suck at this,” Parker whispered, scrunching his face.

Chelsea shook her head.

“I’m just glad you finally agreed to come out here with me,” she whispered back.

She could see Anthony looking at her from across the room. He was whirling Renae around like an expert, but Chelsea didn’t mind. She knew she’d chosen the right guy. And just in case Anthony had any doubts on the subject, she wanted to show him and everyone just how happy she was.

Parker felt Chelsea wrap both her arms around his neck and kiss him hard. He opened his eyes briefly and saw Anthony LeBrun looking at him with what was unmistakably jealousy. He never in a million years would have guessed Anthony would be jealous of him about anything.

“You know, you were totally worth the wait,” Chelsea whispered when she finally came up for air.

“Worth the wait?” Parker echoed, confused.

Chelsea nodded but didn’t explain, preferring instead to draw him in for another kiss.

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Old 01-05-2009, 12:01 AM   #32
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Whoo-hoo! New segment!

Is that the end? If so, it's very nice and rounded off well. If not, w00t more parts!
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Old 01-26-2009, 09:33 PM   #34
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Among other things I've been doing of late, I've been thinking a lot about whether or not I want to add more to this. Right now it's a no, if only because I'm excited to start working on some other things!
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Old 01-27-2009, 09:54 AM   #35
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Nuuuuuu! That can't be the end of it. More, please?
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Very good, I really enjoyed this!
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Old 12-15-2011, 09:08 PM   #37
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Bumping this because it's one of my favorites! I miss you, Starling!
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Still one of my favorite stories!
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Just randomly talked to a guy named Parker and immediately had to come re-read this story for the zillionth time. Wherever you are, Starling, I hope you're still writing!
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