Ten to One - by Xyantha (~BHM/~BBW, Romance, ~SWG) - Page 2

conversecurves · 04-05-2012, 11:20 PM

Please continue this, that was amazing!

Jerry Thomas · 04-15-2012, 03:26 PM

I just now started reading your great story and I really like it. Nice going. When I started reading the first chapter, I wondered if you were from Canada or Britain (or someplace else besides the US) because of the spelling, but your reference to "Tim's" (Tim Horton's) in that cute little scene clinched it for me. Oh, Canada! I'd really like a Tim Horton's here in my town, but I think I would automatically gain 20 pounds if one opened.

SilkySunshine · 05-19-2012, 02:22 PM

Brilliant story! I'm just discovering all the great BHM writers atm after years of lurking.

Jerry, we don't have Tims in Britain, at least I've never come across it in my travels.

Jerry Thomas · 05-19-2012, 07:13 PM

I think Tim Horton's is a national institution in Canada! We don't have enough of them here in the US, just some of them in the States closest to the border with Canada. You could probably build an entire story around Tim Horton's. No disrespect intended to our Canadian friends!

Tad · 08-31-2012, 01:24 PM

I'm still hoping you get time to continue this one...... I really enjoyed the dynamics in it!

Anjula · 04-19-2017, 11:33 AM

Oh Xyantha I love your writing sooooo much, I'm really hoping you will continue this story one day

Kompliziert · 09-22-2017, 02:54 AM

Wow, once again, you've written one of my favorite sexy stories. I wish so badly there was more to it! ...But of course, I understand, writing things this good must take a lot more effort than voraciously devouring them does. But your stories feel so lush, your characters are so three dimensional (can't resist the temptation to write "fleshed out" here...) and the fabric you weave feels so true to life. Thank you for writing, even though it's so good that none of us can ever get enough.

Xyantha Reborn · 09-30-2017, 04:59 PM

Thanks so much!! Hoping to spend some time writing over the next few weeks on a few stories

growinluvhandles · 01-05-2018, 06:39 AM

Xyantha, don't you worry about it. You've given us a marvelous story with well-developed characters. When you get back to it is your business.

I am much the same way, and I sometimes feel I owe readers, but I don't. My creation is my busioness, and my timeframe is my business, and when I finish, they will appreciate it all the more for the wait.

At least, I hope so.

Best to you.

fat hiker · 02-20-2018, 12:11 PM

How did I miss this one before?

hommecreux · 02-20-2018, 10:59 PM

For real. This story is amazeballs. I just started reading all of the stories on dims, and I have to say, Xyantha should be writing books. I would buy them for sure.

08-31-2012, 01:24 PM	#30
Tad mostly harmless Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 12,613	I'm still hoping you get time to continue this one...... I really enjoyed the dynamics in it! __________________ Criticism is so often nothing more than the eye garrulously denouncing the shape of the peephole that gives access to hidden treasure. -Djuna Barnes, writer and artist

04-19-2017, 11:33 AM	#31
Anjula miss wonderfulamazing Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Poland Posts: 1,036	Oh Xyantha I love your writing sooooo much, I'm really hoping you will continue this story one day __________________ www.biijacz.tumblr.com

02-20-2018, 12:11 PM	#35
fat hiker Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Capital of the Great white north Posts: 1,476	How did I miss this one before? __________________ "Eat, Eat! You will gain weight and be more attractive!" - Russian Tour Hostess of the 1980s, as reported in National Geographic

04-05-2012, 11:20 PM	#26
conversecurves Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 15	Please continue this, that was amazing!

04-15-2012, 03:26 PM	#27
Jerry Thomas Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Metro Milwaukee Posts: 189	I just now started reading your great story and I really like it. Nice going. When I started reading the first chapter, I wondered if you were from Canada or Britain (or someplace else besides the US) because of the spelling, but your reference to "Tim's" (Tim Horton's) in that cute little scene clinched it for me. Oh, Canada! I'd really like a Tim Horton's here in my town, but I think I would automatically gain 20 pounds if one opened.

05-19-2012, 02:22 PM	#28
SilkySunshine Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: England Posts: 82	Brilliant story! I'm just discovering all the great BHM writers atm after years of lurking. Jerry, we don't have Tims in Britain, at least I've never come across it in my travels.

05-19-2012, 07:13 PM	#29
Jerry Thomas Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Metro Milwaukee Posts: 189	I think Tim Horton's is a national institution in Canada! We don't have enough of them here in the US, just some of them in the States closest to the border with Canada. You could probably build an entire story around Tim Horton's. No disrespect intended to our Canadian friends!

09-22-2017, 02:54 AM	#32
Kompliziert Complicated Join Date: Aug 2017 Location: Florida Posts: 32	Wow, once again, you've written one of my favorite sexy stories. I wish so badly there was more to it! ...But of course, I understand, writing things this good must take a lot more effort than voraciously devouring them does. But your stories feel so lush, your characters are so three dimensional (can't resist the temptation to write "fleshed out" here...) and the fabric you weave feels so true to life. Thank you for writing, even though it's so good that none of us can ever get enough.

09-30-2017, 04:59 PM	#33
Xyantha Reborn - Actually Very Tame! Join Date: Jul 2014 Location: Canada Posts: 2,691	Thanks so much!! Hoping to spend some time writing over the next few weeks on a few stories

01-05-2018, 06:39 AM	#34
growinluvhandles Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Lexington, KY Posts: 73	Xyantha, don't you worry about it. You've given us a marvelous story with well-developed characters. When you get back to it is your business. I am much the same way, and I sometimes feel I owe readers, but I don't. My creation is my busioness, and my timeframe is my business, and when I finish, they will appreciate it all the more for the wait. At least, I hope so. Best to you.

02-20-2018, 10:59 PM	#36
hommecreux Attack of the twinkies. Join Date: Jul 2017 Location: Indiana Posts: 64	For real. This story is amazeballs. I just started reading all of the stories on dims, and I have to say, Xyantha should be writing books. I would buy them for sure.