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Old 01-07-2018, 07:27 AM   #26
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After having slept on this Iíve decided I definitely agree with you agouderia, it would be a mistake to leave this hanging here. So there will be plenty more to come (in hopefully more regular updates)
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Old 01-15-2018, 08:38 AM   #27
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I agree 100% with Agouderia - its gone too far for a short story and needs a happy ending. The backstory and how she adapts to her self-realization of being a chubby chaser are also good ideas.

One additional suggestion: it could easily blossom into a mutual size acceptance tale as your original protagonist learns to match her boy friend's consumption instead of self-consciously passing over her plate.
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