Something to sing by Scx (~BBW, Song)

Scx · 11-07-2006, 08:03 PM

~BBW, Song -- an ode to a pretty woman (well,sort of)

Something to Sing
by Scx

To a somewhat recognizable tune:

Raven hair and ruby lips
Fat surrounds her waist and hips.
Heavy footsteps in the night
She's a piggy girl with her belly tight.
Wooo hoo, weighty woman,
See the hungry eyes
Wooo hoo, weighty woman,
She got the meat on her thighs.

She gorged herself all through the day
Eating all that came her way.
Her gurgling belly sung a different tune
When she fed herself on pasta with a serving spoon.
Wooo hoo, weighty woman,
See the hungry eyes
Wooo hoo, weighty woman,
She got the meat on her thighs.

Well I know you want a feedee,
Let me tell you easy
She's been eating all the Devil's food.
And there's some things that should be said
Before she breaks your bed
Swaying flab will make you harder than a model could.
Wooo hoo, weighty woman,
See the hungry eyes
Wooo hoo, weighty woman,
She got the meat on her thighs.

S.

Scx · 11-08-2006, 07:38 PM

All right, as soon as I can figure out how to edit this thing, I'm going to undo the Observer's edits. I know s/he means well, but a) it ain't a limerick, b) it's not entitled 'Something to Sing' and c) Well, what was wrong with leaving it alone?

Finally, my /nick is NOT in BLOCK CAPS.

Scx

Observer · 11-08-2006, 09:34 PM

"Something to Sing" was your thread title, I simply used it. - if you prefer "Weighty Woman" or something else its fine by me. Just advise - here or by the mail system.

The case on the last two letters of your nick has been changed already as requested.

Your concerns about the summary line I've addressed in another post; I've changed limerick to song in hopes of putting us on the same page. Actually, song is probably better anyway. This contribution will wind up in the Fine Arts Forum in either case.

As for editing after posting, the same thread revision delays apply here as in all Dimension forums - you can't edit or delete after 15 minutes without Mod rights.

Scx · 11-08-2006, 10:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Observer

"Something to Sing" was your thread title, I simply used it. - if you prefer "Weighty Woman" or something else its fine by me. Just advise - here or by the mail system.

The case on the last two letters of your nick has been changed already as requested.

Your concerns about the summary line I've addressed in another post; I've changed limerick to song in hopes of putting us on the same page. Actually, song is probably better anyway. This contribution will wind up in the Fine Arts Forum in either case.

As for editing after posting, the same thread revision delays apply here as in all Dimension forums - you can't edit or delete after 15 minutes without Mod rights.

"Song" is better than 'limerick', but I don't see why it needs a title at all. I put out 'Something to sing' as an instruction, not a title. I deliberately didn't format my post with a title because it was just a few spewn lines. Your reformatting it as a submission under that title was not appreciated. I would have preferred it remain just a few tossed-off lines.

I suppose I should create my own summaries if I don't want you making them for me. In this case, I didn't really want one.

Thank you for correctly revising my name.

I also noticed you removed my notice that one of my threads had been deleted. Whyfor that?

Scx

Observer · 11-08-2006, 10:48 PM

The notice was not deleted. It was moved to the Readers Forum, which is where notices belong.

Scx · 11-11-2006, 01:02 PM

I found it. Eventually. As have some others - Am I going to get slammed for privmsg'ing things that have been publically prohibited?

And I think, upon reflection, that I would prefer that you tore off my 'subject' and the title that you attached on that basis and renamed the entire thread 'Weighty Woman' (with applicable category notations).

I threw out the subject in a somewhat deliberately misleading manner, in the hopes that the reader would come in unsuspecting. I'm afraid with the title and summary it'll be about as surprising (and given expectations, as funny as) as overcooked pasta, but better snappy titles than sappy titles. IMHO.

Scx

Scx · 11-11-2006, 01:17 PM

If it were a limerick, it would have gone something like this:

There once was a girl named Vanessa
The daughter of a Contessa
Who ate so much food
Her belly was lewd

And the punch line is left open to the readers.

Scx

billedmeup · 11-14-2006, 10:20 PM

And spilled over the top of her dress-a

11-07-2006, 08:03 PM	#1
Scx Fringy Lunatic Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Elsewhere Posts: 233	Something to sing by Scx (~BBW, Song) ~BBW, Song -- an ode to a pretty woman (well,sort of) Something to Sing by Scx To a somewhat recognizable tune: Raven hair and ruby lips Fat surrounds her waist and hips. Heavy footsteps in the night She's a piggy girl with her belly tight. Wooo hoo, weighty woman, See the hungry eyes Wooo hoo, weighty woman, She got the meat on her thighs. She gorged herself all through the day Eating all that came her way. Her gurgling belly sung a different tune When she fed herself on pasta with a serving spoon. Wooo hoo, weighty woman, See the hungry eyes Wooo hoo, weighty woman, She got the meat on her thighs. Well I know you want a feedee, Let me tell you easy She's been eating all the Devil's food. And there's some things that should be said Before she breaks your bed Swaying flab will make you harder than a model could. Wooo hoo, weighty woman, See the hungry eyes Wooo hoo, weighty woman, She got the meat on her thighs. S. Last edited by Observer : 11-08-2006 at 09:31 PM.

11-08-2006, 09:34 PM	#3
Observer Editor/Writer/Commentator Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 5,157	"Something to Sing" was your thread title, I simply used it. - if you prefer "Weighty Woman" or something else its fine by me. Just advise - here or by the mail system. The case on the last two letters of your nick has been changed already as requested. Your concerns about the summary line I've addressed in another post; I've changed limerick to song in hopes of putting us on the same page. Actually, song is probably better anyway. This contribution will wind up in the Fine Arts Forum in either case. As for editing after posting, the same thread revision delays apply here as in all Dimension forums - you can't edit or delete after 15 minutes without Mod rights. Last edited by Observer : 11-08-2006 at 09:40 PM.

11-08-2006, 10:48 PM	#5
Observer Editor/Writer/Commentator Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 5,157	Not guilty The notice was not deleted. It was moved to the Readers Forum, which is where notices belong.

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11-08-2006, 07:38 PM	#2
Scx Fringy Lunatic Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Elsewhere Posts: 233	All right, as soon as I can figure out how to edit this thing, I'm going to undo the Observer's edits. I know s/he means well, but a) it ain't a limerick, b) it's not entitled 'Something to Sing' and c) Well, what was wrong with leaving it alone? Finally, my /nick is NOT in BLOCK CAPS. Scx

11-11-2006, 01:02 PM	#6
Scx Fringy Lunatic Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Elsewhere Posts: 233	I found it. Eventually. As have some others - Am I going to get slammed for privmsg'ing things that have been publically prohibited? And I think, upon reflection, that I would prefer that you tore off my 'subject' and the title that you attached on that basis and renamed the entire thread 'Weighty Woman' (with applicable category notations). I threw out the subject in a somewhat deliberately misleading manner, in the hopes that the reader would come in unsuspecting. I'm afraid with the title and summary it'll be about as surprising (and given expectations, as funny as) as overcooked pasta, but better snappy titles than sappy titles. IMHO. Scx

11-11-2006, 01:17 PM	#7
Scx Fringy Lunatic Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Elsewhere Posts: 233	If it were a limerick, it would have gone something like this: There once was a girl named Vanessa The daughter of a Contessa Who ate so much food Her belly was lewd And the punch line is left open to the readers. Scx

11-14-2006, 10:20 PM	#8
billedmeup Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 56	And spilled over the top of her dress-a