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Old 10-13-2005, 07:32 AM   #1
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BBW, XWG: Here’s a darker tale of forced transformation from a writer who specializes in this type of story . . .

Would You Like to Be Super Sized?

By JP

Jenna was heading home from her Sorority that she was pledging at. It was a late but light night of hazing, chores, and over all humiliation, but ultimately it would be worth it she figured. She had a lot going on in her life right now, including cheerleader tryouts in a month, which being in a sorority only helps. Right now though, one of her main concerns was that she was so hungry. She served dinner to all the girls that night, but didn't have the chance to eat anything herself. Ordinarily she wouldn't do it, but she was seriously considering stopping and getting some fast food. Dorm food was fattening enough, but fast food was the last thing she needed. However, she was so hungry! And she could always work it off in the gym with a few extra minutes on the treadmill. Now the only problem was, was there any place open after 1AM?

She walked past several restaurants and fast food places, but they were all closed. She could actually hear her stomach growling and began to despair that she wouldn't find anything and would have to go to bed hungry, when she saw a small burger place across the street. It looked like any number of fast food places all over the US. Slightly 50s looking, cheesy decor, a little small though and it had no drive thru. That wasn't too surprising, in a college town many places didn't have drive thrus. It was called 'Eddie's Place, Home of the Super Sizer!'. Jenna couldn't recall seeing this place before, and she did pass by here rather often, but it also looked like it was brand new, and with how small it was perhaps she just hadn't noticed it. But most importantly it looked like it was still open! She weighed her options. In all honesty, she should just go home and go to bed and eat in the morning, eating at night was one of the worst times to eat. Her stomach growled again, almost as if it knew there was greasy and satisfying food nearby. The decision was made for her, she looked both ways and then crossed the street. The place was empty of customers, which was a little strange, an all night burger place could clean up with all the late night partyers, but then again, it was only Wednesday night, or rather Thursday morning, maybe that was it. Inside she could see just one person working behind the counter, looking like he was preparing to close. When she reached the door she saw that she still had some time before it closed, she was thankful that the grill and kitchen were right behind the counter in plain view, otherwise he might spit on her food for making him cook so close to closing, she remembered her own time working at a pizza place near closing time (not that she ever did that, well just once).

The door rang a bell as she came through, but the man, an older fellow maybe in his late 50s with gray hair, had already seen her coming and put his mop down to greet her with a warm smile. She was a little surprised that it wasn't a college kid, maybe this was the owner or something. The place was immaculately cleaned, and the tables were all bolted down with similarly bolted down stools next to them. The counter was chromed, while the table tops were a plain gleaming white. Behind and above the counter was the menu, nothing too surprising, your typical burger joint, with some ice cream desserts. He wiped the counter with a rag he pulled from his apron pocket. "Welcome, I'm Eddie. Here for a late night snack?" he said continuing his smile. That was a change, actual service with a smile, even this late at night. Jenna couldn't help but smile back, this was a different kind of place than she was used to, but then again she tried not to eat at places like this too often anyway, it wasn't easy to keep her figure trim enough for cheerleading by eating burgers and shakes. It didn't look like they had salads here either.

"Hi! Yes, being a little naughty I guess." she said with a slight giggle. "So you're Eddie? That's neat. I usually don't eat this late, but I missed dinner and I'm pretty hungry."

"Ah, that's not good." said the man. "You're still growing, shouldn't skip meals. Well what can I get you?" said Eddie, slinging the rag over his shoulder with a little flourish, where it landed in the sink. Jenna smiled again and even gave a polite clap of her hands, to which the man gave a slight bow.

"Well let me see." The burgers that were shown looked delicious, juicy, thick, covered in cheese and picture-perfect condiments. The same went for the shakes and fries. And just as she thought, not one thing was diet-worthy. "Hmmmm..." she continued.

"Might I offer a suggestion?" inquired the man, with a slight mischievous raise of his eyebrow.

"Shoot." she said, still looking at the menu. Maybe something on the kid's menu...

"Try the Super Sizer. It's the best value. And it's oh so good."

She didn't see it on the menu until the end, all it said was 'The Super Sizer!' in big fat letters, with a price tag of $4.50. But it didn't say what was in it, or have any pictures, which was strange, because everything else had them. "What's in it? I don't see any pictures." she wondered aloud.

"That's because it has to be seen to be believed." said Eddie. "But, it is incredible."

"I dunno. Sounds like a lot of food, and I was just looking for a snack." she said. Though it did sound good, most likely it was just a big burger and shake and fries, like most places had.

"Well you'd really miss out. Plus you look like you eat salads and cottage cheese all the time. Bird food! You know you want it, something extra, hmmm?" she couldn't tell, but the man was being just a bit suggestive she thought.

"Well..." she figured what she didn't finish she could always bring back with her. Her porker of a roomate would eat it, or any of the boys stopping by would also. Eddie smiled, he knew he had a sale.

"Come on, it's great. Here, just answer me when I ask OK? 'Do you want to get Super Sized?'" said Eddie. Jenna didn't notice the strange look in his eyes because she was digging into her pocket for her money.

Jenna smiled at the question as she looked up, Eddie's strange expression already gone. "Huh? Oh...OK. Yeah. Super Size me." she said as she put down a $5 bill on the counter. Eddie swooshed the money away with a flourish and had it in the cash register and returned with her two quarters in change almost like a magician doing a trick.

"Great." said Eddie. "Go and have a seat. I'll bring it out to you in a jiffy." as Jenna pocketed the .50 cents. She continued smiling, he was quite a salesman, you just didn't find places like this any more. She passed the clean garbage receptacles, and picked up some napkins and a straw. She picked the nearest empty table, sitting in the booth chair, rather than the bolted down stool across from it.

Once seated she looked up to ask Eddie a question, but he must have gone in the back or something, because he was gone. "So...um...Eddie, when did you open this place uuuUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPP!" the last was turned into a prolonged shriek as her booth suddenly descended into the floor. She tried grabbing the table but wasn't fast enough, and seconds later she felt cold metal encircle her ankles, pinning them to the booth, and then belts shot out from behind her shoulders, crisscrossed in front of her, directly between her smallish breasts, and buried themselves into the seat next to her hips. Her hands flew to the belts, but couldn't budge them as she screamed again. She was held fast to to the seat now, and another set of belts flashed out from the seat directly behind her arms, they looped back once they were around her biceps, and then scooted down, forcing her arms off her chest and pulling them back to the booth itself. The belts continued sliding down her arms, pulling her arms with her, until they were like cuffs at her wrists, and her wrists were pinned next to her hips. She continued to struggle, so frightened she no longer was able to scream, just managing startled grunts and unintelligible sounds. Finally, metal rods encased in leather padding sprang out on either side of her head, about ear level, preventing her from thrashing her head, but more straps followed. One flew right above her eyes, and encased her forehead, pulling her head back and holding her still finally. And at last, small metal arms descended from the rods on the side of her head, they were still a part of the rods keeping her head from moving to the sides, but they were slim and robotic, almost spidery looking. They had an appendage at the end that looked like a wide C shaped clamp, and these clamps pressed themselves to the sides of her jaw, making a perfect match. As soon as that happened, all her useless noise making stopped, and her jaw seemed to hang limply, out of her control.

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The rest of her wasn't so powerless, but held all the same. She could struggle and squirm quite a bit, but she was held fast, her head especially. Even if she tried to squirm down in the seat, with her head pinned she wouldn't get anywhere. She stared around in terror at her new surroundings. Initially she couldn't make out anything, it was just dark, and a little cool. She had the impression that wherever she was, it was big, which didn't seem possible. Then again, she had no idea how far she fell in the first place. The main thing she heard was the sounds of her own frantic breathing and her futile struggling. Then she became aware of a loud beeping, like the kind a bus makes when backing up. It wasn't far away, but grew louder as it approached. As it got closer she could start making out a large shape, like a big vehicle, a construction truck maybe, it was approaching her, but she couldn't make out anything else. The beeping came to within maybe 10 feet or so before it finally stopped, and she heard its engine (which had been masked by the loud beeping) shut off. A heavy door opened and then slammed closed, and try as she might she couldn't make a sound, it was as if those things had taken over her mouth. Minutes later she heard a whirring sound, like a large electric motor approaching her, and the crunch of hard wheels on cement. Another big shape was approaching, this time with no accompanying beeping, and when it came to within ten feet or so, and to the side of the first shape, she heard a pneumatic hiss, and the sound of something heavy and flat being placed on the ground. Whatever it was, it was huge, and she got a very bad feeling about it, even more than what she already had. That electric motor sound was pulling away, faster this time. Soon enough it was coming back, and by the sound of it, it was straining. While she was waiting though she could smell the unmistakable scent of burgers; grilled meat, cheese, onions, all the smells of a barbecue...or a fast food joint. Now the savory smells of french fries and onion rings were coming, along with the electric motor, but she never thought smells like that could be so menacing. In the near darkness a large mound was approaching, and set down with a hiss, next to the first one. She couldn't see what it was though, but her nose gave her an idea. The electric motor pulled back again, but didn't go far, and soon enough it was shut down, and she could hear footsteps approaching, There was a click, and then lights flashed on, causing Jenna to blink a second or two before she could see. She almost wished it was dark still.

In front of her, to her left was a cement mixing truck, but unlike any she had ever seen. It was smaller than some she supposed, but then again she didn't know cement trucks too well. But she'd definitely never seen one like this! The main chamber was painted in red and white, like a candy cane, and it spun hypnotically, no doubt mixing the frosty contents within. It was tilted back so as not to pour it, and at the top she saw a mound of whipped cream, it had to be five feet thick! Covered in chocolate syrup and nuts, there was a thick hose inserted through the top, the other end was coiled neatly, and resting in the claw of a robotic arm.

In the center, to the right of the truck was what looked like at first like a cheeseburger that belonged in a burger themed playground. Then she realized her eyes were playing tricks on her. It wasn't a single giant cheeseburger, but rather a mound, a hill of cheeseburgers, each one bigger than a burger she'd eat in two meals. Enough to feed an army! Each one looked like it was two inches thick, smothered in cheese, topped with lettuce, onions, pickles, mayo and ketchup and mustard. They were all picture-perfect, just like the ones she saw in the restaurant upstairs. They were all resting on a massive plastic fast food tray on top of a pallet that was covered in plastic wrap. To either side of the pallet was a metal column that had robotic arms and gripping claws at the end of them.

Finally, to the right of that, dumped onto a wax paper covered tray was a steaming pile of fresh french fries and onion rings more than 5 feet high at least. Singed to a golden brown she could actually see little greasy bubbles still popping on their surface. Next to it were several buckets of red slop which she assumed was ketchup, and two more columns with robotic attachments, that clacked and grasped in the air, as if eager to get to work. Not far behind the fries and rings, she saw the forklift that brought these things here, and to the side of the fries was the man that was responsible. Eddie, still dressed n his white work clothes with the grease stained apron stood there admiring his work, 'The Super Sizer'.

Eddie's grin was about as big and sinister as it could be. Jenna tried struggling more as he approached, but it was useless, her eyes bugging out in fear. "I told you it had to be seen to be believed! Can you imagine? All this food for only $4.50! I mean, you only live once right? Might as well enjoy yourself! And you can't do that on tofu burgers and bottled water! Right? Right!" he concluded. As he did so he stepped aside and gestured to the machines and the huge amount of food in a sweeping bow. The arms on the side of the burgers came to life. The one on the right mechanically reached over and picked up a steaming entre in a deft and efficient move, and before Jenna knew it the, burger was right under her nose.

The smell was heavenly, but she had to resist, there was no way she could eat all of this! She'd explode! Despite all of her squirming, her mewling noises, and her silent mental protests, her mouth opened wide of its own volition, beyond all of her control. The delicious burger was shoved in unceremoniously, and she took a huge a bite, bigger than any bites she normally took. She immediately began chewing, like a machine. Her jaws and tongue offered their full cooperation, they were willing participants in this feast. And it was so good! The best burger she ever had! It was fatty, greasy, a little pink in the center, and just delicious in every way. Before she knew it she'd swallowed most of it and her mouth was gaping open for more, and she was obliged as even more burger was shoved in. She chewed away, in near unwilling orgasmic eating, some grease and condiments dripping down her chin. Soon though the first burger was done, and she already felt full! But there was no rest, no respite.

What came next was a double handful of fries and onion rings, slathered in ketchup. Her mouth opened wide, as her hands and eyes closed in protest. The greasy fried food was in her mouth regardless. They were heavenly. Hot, very hot, but the ketchup prevented her from having a scorched mouth. They were delicious, the kind of fries and rings you can only get at greasy hot dog stands, the kind that should have a warning label on them. The second handful was shoved in without warning, forcing the first down her throat. She was startled and panicking at first, but she found she was able to breathe somehow. She grazed on the potatoes and onions, and when she was finally done with them she felt fuller than she ever had in her life. More was to come though.

She saw the one robotic arm retract back to the fries, but now the third was approaching with a hose in its claw. The hose of course led to the cement mixer filled with what she assumed (hoped?) was a colossal chocolate shake. The booth began reclining, pulling her back to a laying position, and she lost sight of the enormous piles of food, and was treated to the sight of a slightly bulging stomach, stretching the T-shirt she was wearing. The hose again came into a view, and paused above her, like a poisonous snake almost, before it suddenly plunged into her gaping mouth, lodging itself firmly in her teeth. The hose shuddered as it began to get its contents pumped through it and into its new home. Seconds later Jenna was treated to a force fed chocolate shake, the most delicious and creamy she'd ever had, pumped into her with the strength of a garden hose. She had plenty of time to savor it, as it rushed over her tongue and down her gullet, her throat actually bulging from the effort. But it was too much, way too much. Her eyes swelled as she saw her petite stomach do the same. Her belly was rising as it was filled with the ice cream treat making her look pregnant, and then very pregnant. Her stomach was making groaning and sloshing sounds, but the sloshing sounds were subsiding as the pressure grew. Finally, when she thought she would surely burst, the hose withdrew like lightning, leaving nothing but a delicious chocolate and whipped cream aftertaste. Her belly was massive though, like she swallowed a beach ball, and it looked tight as one also. It didn't hurt though, but felt tight, and she felt incredibly full. Then she felt a warmth overtake her, pleasant but strong, and she closed her eyes as it washed over her. She wasn't sure how long she lay like that, but when the warmth ended, she felt the seat right itself again, and she felt the pressure was gone. She opened her eyes and saw that her stomach was back to...almost normal.

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All that food had to go somewhere. Her stomach was no longer full and swollen to the bursting point. But it looked like she was. Every part of her was larger, fleshier. Her shirt was stretched tight over her now, her arms lost their tone, her breasts were full and large, her sweat pants tight around her expanded waistline and hips. Her stomach was empty, but looked like it could hold even more than it did before, like some of the girls at school after their freshman year, like her roomate. Tears rolled down her face as she saw all of her years of diet and exercise ruined. And then more tears came with the realization that this was just the beginning. She heard the robotic arm approaching before she saw it, but not before she smelled the cheese covered burger it carried, and her stomach growled, harder than it did before this whole nightmare happened.

No time was wasted. Her mouth was opened and half the burger was shoved in, not like the 'dainty' bites she took before. She realized that the robots were on a schedule, and she was just a human bag to be filled up as part of their programmed task. The burger was just as hot, juicy and delicious as before, and she was even hungrier for it now, despite her terror at her situation. The other half was being shoved in, despite the seeming impossibility of it. Her mouth so stuffed full it seemed she could barely move it, but she somehow kept methodically chewing and swallowing large chunks of burger, cheese and condiments. The first burger wasn't done before the other robot arm started pushing the next one in. Her fingers and even her toes were clenching futilely as she was mechanically stuffed and force fed.

Moments later she saw that the arms for the fries were not going to be outdone, they each brought a double handful of ketchup covered fried treats to her mouth, and they would not be denied! Her mouth was wide open and filled with burgers and buns, but that didn't matter. Like stuffing an over full suitcase, the fries and rings found a place in her mouth, they just needed to be shoved in a bit. The burger was mostly unchewed when it was forced down her throat, but again she was in no danger, but it still was a panic filled moment or two. More fries and onion rings were shoved in, just as hot and greasy as before, and then more again. Ketchup and grease now covered her face and the front of her shirt. Her mouth and stomach were full and bloated with the fatty fast food, and she looked absolutely ridiculous trying to chew up the greasy mess with her cheeks bulging almost impossibly.

"Looks like you need a little something to wash that down!" said Eddie. In all her eating and captivity, she'd forgotten about him! But he was right to the side of her, and he gestured in a 'come here' gesture to the shake machine. It obliged him like an eager puppy and soon enough she was reclining again, staring at Eddie's smiling face with hate filled eyes, her mouth still mechanically chewing, but not fast enough! The hose was simply plugged into her pie hole, right into the mush of food still in there, and turned on full blast. She arched her back as much as she could, as the pressure from the hose quickly forced the remaining food in her mouth down into her stomach with a blast of chocolate. She watched in horror as her bloated and fat stomach took on new dimensions. Her shirt was already tight, now it was tearing. The stitches at the side first groaned, and then popped with a ripping sound. She was thankful she wasn't wearing a bra tonight, it might have killed her! But her stomach continued to rise, higher and larger than before. And faster too, because the shake was pumped in at greater force, and was just as delicious. Her stomach trembled, and she felt her sweat pants start to slide down away from her ballooning waist, and she was thankful again for dressing so casually. She had to explode, she had to! No one could have a belly four feet tall and live! Even Eddie was impressed and perhaps concerned. He prudently stepped back a bit, but didn't stop the flow. Jenna closed her eyes, it was coming, she'd explode and this would all be over. Moments later it was over, but she didn't explode. The hose was withdrawn from her mouth, and she felt warm again, despite the enormous amount of very cold ice cream in her stomach. She dared open her eyes. She was right, her stomach had to be at least four feet high, but it was shrinking fast, and going...elsewhere, as the warmth continued.

She could see her belly button receding into her stomach, telling her that her belly was becoming massive now from fat not food. Her arms were becoming more flabby, either that or her hips were getting wider, it was hard to say because now her hands and hips were touching, when they were probably secured more than foot apart before. Her boobs were definitely getting bigger, they first poked through the criss cross of belts on her chest, and then sagged with the extra girth onto her still expanding fat belly. Her legs made loud slapping sounds on the leathery booth as she still struggled, swollen with new flab. She even felt the small columns to the side of her head pressing onto her more, especially at her cheeks. She was so busy noticing the changes that she didn't see what Eddie had done.

About 8 feet above the ground, but in easy view of her was a white screen that he somehow produced. She couldn't see the ceiling still, it was too dark, but the screen was large, like a movie screen in her classrooms. Initially it was blank white, but a moment later an image appeared, an image of a large fat woman, bursting out of her clothes, stuffed with fast food, and even hungry looking. The kind of woman she snickered at when she would see her, and share cruel jokes and taunts with her friends, well within earshot of the target. The kind of woman she swore she'd never become. No one needed to tell her who that woman was now, as fresh tears rolled down her chubby face and were shown on the screen as well. She guessed she weighed more than 300 pounds at least, and when she looked down and saw the arms in motion again, each with a thick burger, a hose, or armfuls of french fries and onion rings, she knew that the woman in the screen was going to get a lot bigger.

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The feeding began in earnest. There was no rest for her now. The arms moved so fast, and each tried to shove as much food as it could into her, it almost looked like they were fighting each other to feed her the most. But they were actually in perfect synchronous action.

One burger

Mouth open

Shove

Chew-chew-chew

Mouth open

Rest of burger

Shove

Gulp

Swallow

Chew-chew-chew

Mouth open

Fries and Onion rings with ketchup

Shove and gulp

Chew-chew-chew

Swallow

Mouth open

More fires and onion rings

Chew-chew-chew

Mouth open (no time to swallow)

More fries and onion rings and the next burger

Chew-chew-chew

Swallow

Lean back

Insert hose

Full pressure!

Down the hatch!

Gulp-gulp-gulp!

The rests as she was allowed to digest were becoming further and further apart. Each rest was immediately preceeded by her getting pumped to near exploding point by the hose filling her with sinfully rich chocolate shake. She could either close her eyes or watch a few spectacles. The robotic arms dancing aorund her or the steaming mounds of food, the poor fat woman on the screen getting fatter by the minute, or Eddie chuckling as he poked her newly acquired fat and flab, sometimes dipping a fry into the spilled ketchup and milkshake on her and shoving it into her mouth himself. She had no concept of time other than the little breaks she got to digest. Each one was further apart as her body could hold more and more. It was after three more such breaks that the restraints on her arms and body let her go. This wasn't a chance to escape though, and while she was relieved, it was because they were getting so tight, not that she felt any hope of getting away. Both Eddie and Jenna knew she wasn't going anywhere, and the bonds on her ankles while looser were still there, as were the bonds on her head. By that time she had stopped struggling, as she could barely move, with or without the bonds. She was simply far too fat and heavy and sluggish.

She could see the woman in the screen was bigger than anyone she'd ever seen, except maybe in cartoons or weird movies. Her clothes were in tangled grease and ketchup covered rags, concealing nothing, and mostly torn to shreds by her sudden expansion. Her breasts were in an undefinable category of bra size, maybe if you used kitchen garbage bags and some bungee cords you might have something. They were huge and floppy, somewhat flattening as they lay on her heaving and massive belly. Her belly was simply enormous, cavernous on the inside, like a bean bag on the outside. Now when she was full it was hard to tell, it seemed no matter how much it was stuffed, nothing could stir it, or inflate it further. Not that Eddie and his robot monsters didn't try. Her arms were pinned to her gigantic sides, each so wide with fat from the shoulder down that she couldn't even lift them, her only signs of struggle were her uselessly flapping and flabby hands. Her monstrous ass took up all of the bench now, and then some. Newly gained flab hung over each side of the six foot-plus bench, and her legs were pinned and motionless, both by the gut that rested on them, and their own supply of fat which inflated them like inner tubes. The woman in the screen, which Jenna refused to acknowledge as her, was the fattest she had ever seen, nothing but fat and flab from super chubby face to over plump toes. And she hadn't even gotten through a quarter of the food that was there, and somehow it all stayed either hot or cold, depending on how it was best served.

Open, shove, chew, open, shove, chew, gulp, swallow, open, shove, chew, open, shove, chew, swallow, recline, open, insert hose, pump, gulp, digest, swell, bulge. Repeat. She was indeed as much a part of the process as the robots, a well oiled eating machine, and doing its job well. All concepts of time, fullness, and size were blown away in a surreal food induced haze. She was becoming buried in her flab, her rising stomach and breasts causing the robotic arms to actually have to travel over her to get to her mouth. She no longer was reclined for her injection of chocolate shake, there was no need, nor would she be able to anyway. As a near shapeless human mound, moving was an impossibility, not to mention the bench had retreated into the floor eventually, leaving her completely unfettered, except for the apparatus on her head and mouth, preventing her from turning her head away, which was about the limit of her mobility now anyway. Her weight was unguessable, several tons? Probably more, a lot more. There was no sight of her legs, they were just gone, covered by her stomach. She was upright and resting on her ass and enormous stomach, which spilled forward more than twelve feet in front of her, her ass more than eight feet behind her. The flow of food was actually stopped at one point for several minutes allowing her to digest her latest impossible stuffing, but also so Eddie could move everything back a few more feet. Her arms were only recognizable because of the ham sized ends of them had what were vaguely recognizable as fingers, and then only because those little stuffed sausages had fingernails. Otherwise her arms were probably more than four feet wide at what would be her bicep, that was if she had any muscle tone whatsoever. Her breasts were enormous, hanging down to either side of her in elongated fatty bags that amazingly reached the floor despite her body's overall width. They had pudgy little nipples and aereolas as large as dinner plates. Each one probably weighed twice as much as the poor girl that owned them, before she stopped in to get super sized. Jenna's face was practically unrecognizable it was so fat.

She had gone from bony cuteness, to plump cherubic sweetness, to a cute but grotesquely huge jowled carricature of fatness. She developed several chins along the way, but now they all merged as one, and it looked like her head was merely an outgrowth of her body, with no neck. As if it was plopped onto a ball as an after thought, even her cheeks seeming to merge with her impossibly huge torso. Her mouth couldn't open quite so wide any more, nor could her eyes, but she was still managing to eat just fine it seemed.

She was too big to be real, bigger, heavier, more massive than even an elephant. The gargantuan influx of weight made her actually sit far taller than her height when she walked in. From her titanic ass spreading below her, to the top of her over stuffed head she was more than nine feet tall. But she was far wider than that in all directions. She spread out like a billowing cascade of flesh and fat in all directions, some twenty feet at her widest, which was front to back. She could make not so much as a twitch of her body, except to blink her eyes, and chew the last of the food that was forced into her. The screen was now eye level with her, and she could only cry at the poor woman in there, so impossibly fat, and in such an impossbily fast time. She finally did accept though, that the woman was indeed her, when the screen rolled away out of sight, and no more food was forced into her. She heard an electric whirring sound, and soon saw Eddie again, standing on and being lifted into view by the forklift. He seemed so far away, but he actually had the forklift as close as he dared, the wheels mere inches from her belly on the ground. He was still more than ten feet away though!

"What did I tell you? Well worth the $4.50 right?" he said as he prodded an enormous fat roll with the toe of his clean and black shoe. She was covered in spilled ketchup, fries, onion rings, chunks as well as whole burgers, and chocolate shake. "Well I have to get going soon. But first let me get you cleaned up and on your way." he said, reaching back and producing a hose with an attachment one usually saw for washing trucks. He turned on the water, and she could see it was soapy, and began spraying her down with the warm sudsy water. Her quiet weeping protests were ignored as he continued to wash her down with casual effiency. She felt other jets of warm water on her from different angles, and assumed that the robots were washing her as well, other wise this could take a while. Eddie actually climbed onto her and hoisted her incredible rolls of flab to make sure he could get all of the food debris. Enough food was washed off her to feed several people it semmed. She hardly felt his added weight, but just absorbed the indignity. Soon enough she was completely clean, the robotic arms tearing away the last of her clothes, no matter how deep in her vast crevices they were. She was naked as the day she was born, but far larger.

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"OK, well I'm on my way, got other places to go, other customers to fill...I mean orders to fill." he smiled at his intentional little slip there.

The apparatus on her head finally retracted and she could move her mouth on her own again. At first she seemed unable to, like she'd forgotten, but she found her control and voice again. "You bastard!" she cried, but her voice was little more than a peep, a mouse's squeak from a whale's body. If he heard it, she doubted it, she could already hear the machines pulling away, one by one. She sat there in relative silence, unable to move a muscle, crying to the man that did this to her. And the irony that really struck her, was that she PAID for this to happen to her. Eventually the machines were all gone, or at least the noise of them was gone. Moments later she became conscious of a light coming down on her from above. It was small at first but getting larger by the second. She strained her head as much as she could, which was not very much at all, and she thought she could see the sky widening above her, like doors were opening directly above her.

"Help!" she cried as loud as she could "Help!" but then stopped. Wait! People would see her like this! She couldn't bear that! She stayed as quiet as she could, hoping that no one heard her from way down below. But someone would find her eventually! She cried some more, and then felt the ground shaking and vibrating under her. Her body absorbed the trembling without even a ripple though. Then she began to feel movement, and felt like she was rising. She must have been on some kind of huge (and strong!) platform or something, because she was steadily rising towards that large opening above her. "No! Nononono!" she cried, but even her hands couldn't clench any more, for all the good that would do. There was open and early morning sky above her and getting closer, instead of the restaurant that should have been there. And to her shock and dismay she heard voices near the edge of it.

"What the hell is it?" said one young man's voice.

"Where did this hole come from?" said a young woman.

"Something's coming up!" said another man, and Jenna thought she could see a man peeking over the side of the hole.

"What is it?" said another coming to his side.

"I-I don't know..." he stammered as her vast bulk started coming more into view.

Jenna cried but said nothing as she continued to rise. What could she say? More people were gathering at the edge staring down at her.

"It almost looks like..." the next man's thought remained unfinished, but it was nonetheless confirmed a few moments later when Jenna's head poked up through the parking lot of the old and long abandoned fast food restaurant behind her. They could see that the shapeless form coming up from some strange chamber underground was a woman when she made shame filled eye contact with them. The people gasped in shock. "Get back!" yelled a man, and they did so, giving her plenty of room. She continued rising, and as she did so the people nearest her became obscured from her sight by her incredible bulk. But not the ones behind them, nor the ones gathering on the sidewalk to look at this bizarre spectacle. In another moment she was completely at street level, and the machine that brought her up here stopped moving. She was revealed in all her gigantic glory for all to see. All the people gathered around dropped their jaws, and many also dropped whatever they were holding.

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I'm very sorry for not working out that project, but real life got me very bad. I love your stories each new one makes a good day for me.
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i love the whole weight gain process, but truly love it in forced or revenge type scenario sprinkled with some humiliation! Keep the those kind of stories rolling ... we love them.
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I'm glad you liked it. To be honest I'm not all that pleased with this one. I think the ending came too quick, and that silly little font change at the very end was hardly necessary. In general I try to have just a touch more plot to a story than just someone swelling up. I like to have a reason for doing so, some kind of logic to make it at least a little plausible for why it might happen at all. This one is more like a Twilight Zone episode, it gets right to the meat and potatoes of someone getting terribly fat. And Jenna did get plenty fat no doubt. I do like the forced fattening of course, if any of you have read my other stories then you've probably come to expect that of me. I've got another story brewing in my head, maybe I'll have it soon. Til then take care.
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I'm sorry, but I'm not sure what project you're talking about. But I do know all the pressures of real life, it's one of the reasons I've written so few stories lately. But I'm glad you like it, and feel free to post this on you're Yahoo group.
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Just finished reading the story. I have only one thing to say: FANTASTIC! This was the best XWG story I've ever read! An obvious take on PIGS IS PIGS. And a hall of a lot better written than the one that was put out by Willix some years ago.
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JP said he was not satified with the ending on this one. I am inclined to agree there. Here's an idea I toyed with. The Super Sizer is lited on the menu as coming with a lifetime guarentee. When she is raised up into ground level, she emerges in a large tent containing dozens of other 300 ton+ fatties who had been Super Sized. Jenna would be spending the rest of her life here being cared for by the people who employed Eddie to do this to her -- her specifically. She was special -- that fact that she could be fattened to over 300+ tons and live clearly shows that to be the case.

I did some math using the size figures for Jenna when Eddie is finished with her and was able to calculate her approximate weight -- 360 tons!

Perhaps Eddie's employers were scientists intent on tracking down and studying Jenna's kind. Odesity of that magnitude should have been instantly fatal. Perhaps in the case of her and these others, the health effects are reversed somehow -- being obese is benificial and extends life. Jenna could be to that on ffattie in the tent -- as lage as a Blue Whale -- was over 1000 years old.
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JP said he was not satified with the ending on this one. I am inclined to agree there. Here's an idea I toyed with. The Super Sizer is lited on the menu as coming with a lifetime guarentee. When she is raised up into ground level, she emerges in a large tent containing dozens of other 300 ton+ fatties who had been Super Sized. Jenna would be spending the rest of her life here being cared for by the people who employed Eddie to do this to her -- her specifically. She was special -- that fact that she could be fattened to over 300+ tons and live clearly shows that to be the case.

I did some math using the size figures for Jenna when Eddie is finished with her and was able to calculate her approximate weight -- 360 tons!

Perhaps Eddie's employers were scientists intent on tracking down and studying Jenna's kind. Odesity of that magnitude should have been instantly fatal. Perhaps in the case of her and these others, the health effects are reversed somehow -- being obese is benificial and extends life. Jenna could be to that on ffattie in the tent -- as lage as a Blue Whale -- was over 1000 years old.
Hi all, just now saw the conversation regarding this story. Glad you liked it so much.

Just a question, how did you come to the 360 ton weight? The biggest I've ever had someone get was in the story Experiments in Revenge, where I got a woman up to 25,000 pounds.
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Hi all, just now saw the conversation regarding this story. Glad you liked it so much.

Just a question, how did you come to the 360 ton weight? The biggest I've ever had someone get was in the story Experiments in Revenge, where I got a woman up to 25,000 pounds.
Although you did not at any time state her weight during the latter part of the story, you did provide her physical dimensions. Her head was 9 feet from the ground with an 8 foot ass behind her. You have an estimated front to back measurement of 20 feet during the story -- subtracting the 8 feet of her ass from that figure gives her belly a measurment of 12 extending from her. Given that Eddie had to use the forklif to lift himself into her view, I concluded that the top of her belly was her actual high point -- I concluded that her belly was 12 high and wide.

This give her 3 max measurments of Height Width and Depth as 12x12x20 -- in geometry, this stucture is called a prolate sphereoid. There is a math site (http://www.bookrags.com/wiki/Spheroid) that has calculator functions that can determine the total volume (cubic feet) of her using these figures: 12063.7157898 cubic feet.

The next step is to convert the figure to gallons (US lq). There is a another site that can do such unit conversions.


12063.7157898 cubic feet = 90242.86097304936 gallons.

The website http://www.bodyresults.com/E2fatweight.asp provides the following last piece of needed information:

The question is asked there --

Q: "How much volume in space does a pound of body fat take up?"
A: "...a gallon of liquid (which weighs 8 pounds) is the same weight as 8 pounds of fat: a pound is a pound."

We now know that a gallon of fat weighs 8 pounds. Jenna's total capacity is approximatly 90242.86097304936 gallons. By multiplying this figure by 8, we arrive at her approximate weight.

90242.86097304936 * 8 = 721942.88778439488 pounds

There are 2000 pounds in a ton. We devide this by 2000 to get her weight in tons.

721942.88778439488 / 2000 = 360.97144389219744 tons.

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Hi all, just now saw the conversation regarding this story. Glad you liked it so much.

Just a question, how did you come to the 360 ton weight? The biggest I've ever had someone get was in the story Experiments in Revenge, where I got a woman up to 25,000 pounds.


JP;

Just wanted to let you know, that I consider Jenna and the girl you decribe from the story Experiments in Revenge to be leight weight. Jenna really isn't SUPER SIZED, she should have demanded her money back for being fattened so little.

25,000 pounds? Feather weight. Try 25,000 tons! Now that would be at least a contender for Supe Size. But true Super size (IMHO) would be measured in 6 digit figures AT LEAST.

Truly supersizining her would have resulted in her being fattened to beyond even whale proportions -- not just elephantine.
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Just wanted to let you know, that I consider Jenna and the girl you decribe from the story Experiments in Revenge to be leight weight. Jenna really isn't SUPER SIZED, she should have demanded her money back for being fattened so little.

25,000 pounds? Feather weight. Try 25,000 tons! Now that would be at least a contender for Supe Size. But true Super size (IMHO) would be measured in 6 digit figures AT LEAST.

Truly supersizining her would have resulted in her being fattened to beyond even whale proportions -- not just elephantine.
Well I do like them big no doubt about that, I doubt I could effectivly make a story that had such a huge gain. One of the things that happens when you start getting into such a massive weight is that the size and the numbers become a bit meaningless. People will have a hard time conceiving the actual size, and me (the writer) will have a hard time conveying the image. You basically start running out of decent metaphors. What starts happening is basically an ever increasing series of numbers because we have no frame of reference for what a person might actually look like at that size. So instead of making a good and vibrant description of the subject, we start having to rely on just pure numbers. And while a high number is impressive, it ultimately doesn't do as much visually.

Don't get me wrong, I like big numbers too, but you have to balance them with solid descriptions, otherwise they don't match up. You start saying "Wait...someone 300 tons would be at least as big as...a house or something. Tanks are only 50-60 tons, she can't be 5 or 6 times bigger than a tank."

One of my weaknesses is that I don't have a great eye for certain details such as proportion and real measurements. I hardly ever put in such details as an actual bra size or waistline for example. My descriptions really start coming into their own IMO when they surpass those. But at any rate I avoid any such specific description so as not to be called out on it for innaccuracy.

For me, how much I think Jenna weighs at the end was more along the lines of 5 tons or so. That's almost 10 times the size of the fattest human ever, which I think works well, even if the numbers don't quite add up.

I did write a story though that leads to the kind of fatness you're talking about. It's called Expansion Enterprises:

http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/fo...ad.php?t=10279

In it I describe a woman that was fattened to over 25,000 pounds, but at the end I reveal that she's only in phase 1 of her fattening, and that she's going to be taken to phase 4 or even phase 5, where she'll be filling up the core of a space station the size of a moon. I've alluded at the end of plenty of my stories about a truly staggering future weight gain, but will then usually leave it to the readers imagination of what that might look like.

Make sure to check out my other current stories in Recent Additions, Heavy Debt 4 and Digital Silver. I'm glad some of my old stories are still generating interest.
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Well I do like them big no doubt about that, I doubt I could effectivly make a story that had such a huge gain. One of the things that happens when you start getting into such a massive weight is that the size and the numbers become a bit meaningless. People will have a hard time conceiving the actual size, and me (the writer) will have a hard time conveying the image. You basically start running out of decent metaphors. What starts happening is basically an ever increasing series of numbers because we have no frame of reference for what a person might actually look like at that size. So instead of making a good and vibrant description of the subject, we start having to rely on just pure numbers. And while a high number is impressive, it ultimately doesn't do as much visually.

Don't get me wrong, I like big numbers too, but you have to balance them with solid descriptions, otherwise they don't match up. You start saying "Wait...someone 300 tons would be at least as big as...a house or something. Tanks are only 50-60 tons, she can't be 5 or 6 times bigger than a tank."

One of my weaknesses is that I don't have a great eye for certain details such as proportion and real measurements. I hardly ever put in such details as an actual bra size or waistline for example. My descriptions really start coming into their own IMO when they surpass those. But at any rate I avoid any such specific description so as not to be called out on it for innaccuracy.

For me, how much I think Jenna weighs at the end was more along the lines of 5 tons or so. That's almost 10 times the size of the fattest human ever, which I think works well, even if the numbers don't quite add up.

I did write a story though that leads to the kind of fatness you're talking about. It's called Expansion Enterprises:

http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/fo...ad.php?t=10279

In it I describe a woman that was fattened to over 25,000 pounds, but at the end I reveal that she's only in phase 1 of her fattening, and that she's going to be taken to phase 4 or even phase 5, where she'll be filling up the core of a space station the size of a moon. I've alluded at the end of plenty of my stories about a truly staggering future weight gain, but will then usually leave it to the readers imagination of what that might look like.

Make sure to check out my other current stories in Recent Additions, Heavy Debt 4 and Digital Silver. I'm glad some of my old stories are still generating interest.
JP;

Your estimate is short. You state in the story "Her weight was unguessable, several tons? Probably more, a lot more." That sentence would at least imply that her weight -- if she could be weighed -- was double that figure. The term several means seven. An African Elephant 8 1/2 tons. You did describe her as being "She was too big to be real, bigger, heavier, more massive than even an elephant."

But

I still say this is the best fattening story I've ever read!
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I'm not sure if the math Hamhock used to compute Jenna's volume is correct. I tried using the equations on the website he suggested, and I got a similar number, somewhere abouts 12,063.715 cubic feet, and after the math that followed, got a similar final weight to his, about 361 tons. Now, while I think all of the other math is correct, the computation for the volume seems to be wrong...

Let us first simplify things a little bit. Let's suppose that we were to build a box around Jenna's dimensions, i.e. a 12ft x 12ft x 20ft box. Let us then suppose that Jenna were to keep on gaining weight until she completely filled the box, like a Japanese watermelon. Now, it's not hard to get the volume of a box, so we multiply the dimensions against each other to get 2,880 cubic feet. So now we must ask the question, "How could we have built a 2,880 cubic foot box around a 12,063 cubic foot woman?" The answer is, of course, you can't; the spheroid equation must either be wrong, or Hamhock and I are somehow using it wrong. I'm not sure which, as I don't have a very strong grasp on geometry.

I can give you all a ballpark estimate of Jenna's weight, however. A 2,880 cubic foot Jenna - i.e. a slightly fatter Jenna that was, conveniently, fattened up beyond the story in a 12x12x20 box - would weigh 172,351.15lbs, or 86 tons. In other words, much smaller than Hamhock's prediction, but much bigger than JP's assessment.
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I'm not sure if the math Hamhock used to compute Jenna's volume is correct. I tried using the equations on the website he suggested, and I got a similar number, somewhere abouts 12,063.715 cubic feet, and after the math that followed, got a similar final weight to his, about 361 tons. Now, while I think all of the other math is correct, the computation for the volume seems to be wrong...

Let us first simplify things a little bit. Let's suppose that we were to build a box around Jenna's dimensions, i.e. a 12ft x 12ft x 20ft box. Let us then suppose that Jenna were to keep on gaining weight until she completely filled the box, like a Japanese watermelon. Now, it's not hard to get the volume of a box, so we multiply the dimensions against each other to get 2,880 cubic feet. So now we must ask the question, "How could we have built a 2,880 cubic foot box around a 12,063 cubic foot woman?" The answer is, of course, you can't; the spheroid equation must either be wrong, or Hamhock and I are somehow using it wrong. I'm not sure which, as I don't have a very strong grasp on geometry.

I can give you all a ballpark estimate of Jenna's weight, however. A 2,880 cubic foot Jenna - i.e. a slightly fatter Jenna that was, conveniently, fattened up beyond the story in a 12x12x20 box - would weigh 172,351.15lbs, or 86 tons. In other words, much smaller than Hamhock's prediction, but much bigger than JP's assessment.
Well -- that is interesting. I personally did wonder about the weight figure. She is only 20 feet long. The Blue Whale (the largest animal living on earth) measures 100 feet long and weighs 200 tons. Jenna's physical dimensions are less than the whale's, so how could she weight more? I am wondering.
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Wow, some very interesting discussion here, and it illustrates exactly why I tend to avoid being too specific in my descriptions of XWG.

For the record, she's about 10,000 pounds regardless of any math, I'll go out on a limb, maybe write myself into a corner, but when I wrote it that's the weight I had in mind.

I specifically didn't use a scale though because I didn't feel it was necessary to write one in and Jenna and Ed knew she was far fatter than anyone else. The people up top had never seen anyone so fat, and in fact didn't think she was human at first, actual numbers would IMO likely fall flat. Either she'd be too light (which might be in this case) or too heavy.

The metaphors used are not intended for spot on accuracy. They're the impressions that Jenna and the shocked people had. My goal in writing it was to give the reader the similar shocked reaction. The mind racing for comparisons for something so surreal. The fattest any human has gotten may have been about 1600 pounds, and plenty of people haven't seen or adequately experienced the sight of encountering someone that big, and even if they saw a picture or caught it on TV, they really couldn't quite assimilate the info without prolonged examination. Now (while walking to work) they encounter quite by surprise a woman that's 5 tons. There's no human analog to compare her to. She's taller (while sitting down) than any human, and she's wider than probably any 5 or 6. Their minds (and Jenna's) will race to find a meaningful comparison; Bigger than an elephant, big as a house, etc. That doesn't mean they're accurate, but the impression will last. In all honesty, people would probably compare a person that weighed 4000 pounds with an elephant also, even though the elephant dwarfs them. As it is though, at 10,000 pounds Jenna is bigger than plenty of elephants.

But bottom line, if you go for accuracy in such a thing you'll not only likely to fail (because no one knows what a 5 ton or more woman would really look like), but you might also get written into a corner, which apparently I have. Vivid descriptions mixed with decent geusstimates are IMO the way to go. Numbers eventually just become meaningless, and truly huge sizes are really difficult to describe in such a way as to be more compelling than a more modest size, like a few tons maybe.

Great discussion, I love it when my old stories are discussed.
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I'm not sure if the math Hamhock used to compute Jenna's volume is correct. I tried using the equations on the website he suggested, and I got a similar number, somewhere abouts 12,063.715 cubic feet, and after the math that followed, got a similar final weight to his, about 361 tons. Now, while I think all of the other math is correct, the computation for the volume seems to be wrong...

Let us first simplify things a little bit. Let's suppose that we were to build a box around Jenna's dimensions, i.e. a 12ft x 12ft x 20ft box. Let us then suppose that Jenna were to keep on gaining weight until she completely filled the box, like a Japanese watermelon. Now, it's not hard to get the volume of a box, so we multiply the dimensions against each other to get 2,880 cubic feet. So now we must ask the question, "How could we have built a 2,880 cubic foot box around a 12,063 cubic foot woman?" The answer is, of course, you can't; the spheroid equation must either be wrong, or Hamhock and I are somehow using it wrong. I'm not sure which, as I don't have a very strong grasp on geometry.

I can give you all a ballpark estimate of Jenna's weight, however. A 2,880 cubic foot Jenna - i.e. a slightly fatter Jenna that was, conveniently, fattened up beyond the story in a 12x12x20 box - would weigh 172,351.15lbs, or 86 tons. In other words, much smaller than Hamhock's prediction, but much bigger than JP's assessment.
Did you convert the cubic feet measurment to gallons?

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Wow, some very interesting discussion here, and it illustrates exactly why I tend to avoid being too specific in my descriptions of XWG.

For the record, she's about 10,000 pounds regardless of any math, I'll go out on a limb, maybe write myself into a corner, but when I wrote it that's the weight I had in mind.

I specifically didn't use a scale though because I didn't feel it was necessary to write one in and Jenna and Ed knew she was far fatter than anyone else. The people up top had never seen anyone so fat, and in fact didn't think she was human at first, actual numbers would IMO likely fall flat. Either she'd be too light (which might be in this case) or too heavy.

The metaphors used are not intended for spot on accuracy. They're the impressions that Jenna and the shocked people had. My goal in writing it was to give the reader the similar shocked reaction. The mind racing for comparisons for something so surreal. The fattest any human has gotten may have been about 1600 pounds, and plenty of people haven't seen or adequately experienced the sight of encountering someone that big, and even if they saw a picture or caught it on TV, they really couldn't quite assimilate the info without prolonged examination. Now (while walking to work) they encounter quite by surprise a woman that's 5 tons. There's no human analog to compare her to. She's taller (while sitting down) than any human, and she's wider than probably any 5 or 6. Their minds (and Jenna's) will race to find a meaningful comparison; Bigger than an elephant, big as a house, etc. That doesn't mean they're accurate, but the impression will last. In all honesty, people would probably compare a person that weighed 4000 pounds with an elephant also, even though the elephant dwarfs them. As it is though, at 10,000 pounds Jenna is bigger than plenty of elephants.

But bottom line, if you go for accuracy in such a thing you'll not only likely to fail (because no one knows what a 5 ton or more woman would really look like), but you might also get written into a corner, which apparently I have. Vivid descriptions mixed with decent geusstimates are IMO the way to go. Numbers eventually just become meaningless, and truly huge sizes are really difficult to describe in such a way as to be more compelling than a more modest size, like a few tons maybe.

Great discussion, I love it when my old stories are discussed.
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Here's a question for anybody to think about -- for discussion. There's a lot to this story. Some of it under the surface.

So, here's a question to think about:

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So, here's a question to think about:

Who is Eddie?
You really want to see what goes on behind the scenes don't you?

Eddie makes for an appropriate sounding diner name. Who and what is he? Well...that's one of the story's weaknesses. Since there's no real plot to the story to speak of, I didn't bother going into the backstory of Ed or his establishment. Typically I don't do too many magic stories, sci-fi is my specialty. While I never mentioned magic in this story, sci-fi only covers part of it, it's got the kind of magic that Wonka has a bit. He never gave her any drugs, any nanites, the machines were cartoonish. The restaurant disapeared at the end of it etc.

Other than that, to be honest I don't know any more about Eddie than you do.
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