This is a Marvelous story.One complaint. Could you humor me by using "you're " when it is called for instead of "your beautiful " etc. Just once.
You're such a gifted writer .Please continue the story.
I think in all the reflecting and twisting and turning as she read from the handbook.As she read the Uniform part that obviously is not a reflection of Kelly at this time.I think she should reflect on the fact that there are Very Few who can pull off what is in that book. And instead of being...
I feel like after all these years.You might have Kelly in a good place to be herself.Stand up for herself.And maybe help Gail.Help Mom. And perhaps finish your all time great Magnus Opus weught gain story.Bravo
You're a terrific writer. Especially gifted with imagery and character development. I hope you will have a look back at the spellings of where and whether. Your great story deserves impeccable spelling. :)