This was awesome! I love how the pacing of the gain is timed such that you never really know if the paperweight is responsible, or of we are...
I’m sorry to hear. Don’t focus on what other people think of you—focus on your relationship and family. Weight comes and goes, and obviously some...
I love they way you’ve set these up, what seems to be a diversity of stories. Are they all feeder/feedee relationships?
I love the concept! Genius!
Beautiful! Sophisticated but to the point. I like the relatability of the story, as well as the way you tied it together in the end.
What about several years (and pounds) later, and the two have started a video security company—via the internet, they monitor security cameras of...
In terms of sequels, I could see one being many years later with Alana having gotten much bigger and Trevor having to navigate that. He is okay...
Enjoyable story! The characters had a realistic complexity around their bodies and emotions. Thanks!!
This was a fun vignette! I enjoyed the structure, as well as the plausibility embedded in it.
Raisa Costa inspired?
This story was great. For some reason it’s hard not to feel like there was something left on the table with the epilogue—like the part I was...
Things are getting downright interesting! Can’t wait for more!!
Marlow, this story demonstrates why you’re known as one of the best.
Loving the update!
(FYI it’s spelled ‘Napa’)
I’m loving this story!! I can’t wait to see where it goes! Great, writing, I enjoy the care and realism.
Seems like if she’s not careful, Kelly...
Bad habits. Fast food can become an addiction for some people too.
Thanks for this. I like the vignettes over time approach
I love this story. Reminds me of Bahrain in some ways.
I bet the folks are hoping they don’t have to stay a second year!! I love the way you...
Epic!! Thank you Marlow!!
Also...it didn’t sound like Alan used all that bottle that he got from his grandpa. Is that still lying around somewhere?
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