It may be a month after your question, but I'm going to reply anyway - Bottom line up front - the last few posts have made the story more...
Just read this and wanted to say it is very intriguing and I look forward to more. Appears to be a nice historical fantasy-fiction setting, not...
Well played! Looking forward to the epic confrontation, conclusion, and any epilogues.
I took the time to do that second readthrough. This time I paid more specific attention on a literary analysis level, too. Dawn Astrea Morrigan...
I need to re-read for full effect. Also, Dawn said "Since you like numbers so much, I’ll tell you one", then apparently got distracted by...
Rooting for Dawn, but I'd like to see Holly and Amber get a little sidebar stuffing going, maybe a friendly contest to counterpoint the hostile...
... This has major potential. I like it!
Very good! Any chance of a sequel? I know there's a limit to what can be reasonably described and all, but I'd enjoy reading about her continued...
A long-time favorite, glad to see it posted in the forums :)
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