What about several years (and pounds) later, and the two have started a video security company—via the internet, they monitor security cameras of...
In terms of sequels, I could see one being many years later with Alana having gotten much bigger and Trevor having to navigate that. He is okay...
Enjoyable story! The characters had a realistic complexity around their bodies and emotions. Thanks!!
This was a fun vignette! I enjoyed the structure, as well as the plausibility embedded in it.
Raisa Costa inspired?
This story was great. For some reason it’s hard not to feel like there was something left on the table with the epilogue—like the part I was...
Things are getting downright interesting! Can’t wait for more!!
Marlow, this story demonstrates why you’re known as one of the best.
Loving the update!
(FYI it’s spelled ‘Napa’)
I’m loving this story!! I can’t wait to see where it goes! Great, writing, I enjoy the care and realism.
Seems like if she’s not careful, Kelly...
Bad habits. Fast food can become an addiction for some people too.
Thanks for this. I like the vignettes over time approach
I love this story. Reminds me of Bahrain in some ways.
I bet the folks are hoping they don’t have to stay a second year!! I love the way you...
Epic!! Thank you Marlow!!
Also...it didn’t sound like Alan used all that bottle that he got from his grandpa. Is that still lying around somewhere?
Can’t believe I hadn’t read this story until now. Awesome!!!
True—though most dieters will tell you it’s much easier to regain lost weight than it was to gain it the first time.
Loved this story end to end. And I don’t normally go for science fiction stuff.
It would be interesting to catch up with Susan. I’m sure she...
That ended as climatically as anyone could have hoped!
Great story, please grace us with another as the feeling strikes!!
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