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  1. Aug 10, 2015 #21

    ALS

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    Thanks, everyone! I really appreciate your supportive comments. :)
     
  2. Oct 6, 2015 #22

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    Without meaning to pressure the writer, I can say I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter of this story, whenever it arrives.
     
  3. Nov 9, 2015 #23

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    JimBob, thank you very much for your kind words! :) I'm currently revamping the story and working on an update that I hope to post within the next two days. :)
     
  4. Nov 9, 2015 #24

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    Huzzah! Since you reminded me, I have to say I think I like the story so much because you're balancing out a wee fantasy of mine against how I'd probably react if it actually happened. Fluffiness and largesse in an instant! But also panic and anxiety. Not that I'm any kind of athlete as such...

    It helps, of course, that it's well-written. Plenty of depth to your characters.
     
  5. Nov 12, 2015 #25

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    I am really looking forward to more of this :)
     
  6. Nov 12, 2015 #26

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    write more to this excellent story if you have time ^^

    and i especially liked that he got from athletic to a little jiggly thehe .....

    and she just doing so innocent hihi i like this kind of cute deep characters and their behavior ^^
     

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