This was just lovely and hot and extremely well-written and totally super-sexy! I like the way you switched between the two characters' points-of-view - from experience, it can be a difficult thing to do, but you managed it beautifully. I hope to read more from you in the future!
Hi, I know the last comment was made in 2014, but we did a two person reading of this story in our Horngry 4 More podcast and I thought I might leave a link to all the fans of this wonderful story.
We did this with the permission of the author of course. <3