Look - by SocialbFly (Imagery, Poetry)

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SocialbFly

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Imagery - A love poem


Look

by SocialbFly

[Author's Note: I thought I would post some erotic poetry here, looks like a good place to try it out, eh?]

Look at us
you say
as my thighs
wrap around
you
as you slide into
me
Look at us
and i find our
image
enticing erotic
displayed in
the mirror doors
Look at us
as you move
gripping me
kissing my lips
that ache
with the want
of you
Look at us
as we climax
spent
sweaty
encased in
each other's arms
Look at us.
 

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Look at you! :smitten:

I scorched the puppy's ears reading it out loud! :D

Bravo and encore!
 

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Look at you! :smitten:

I scorched the puppy's ears reading it out loud! :D

Bravo and encore!
hahaha, i woulda thought you would cover Baby Bubbles ears for that one, children are a tad young for that one, lol.
 

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Very nice wordplay, Dianna. You paint a powerful mental image. I'll just fan myself now. :bow:
 

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thank you Runner, and Risible, was that you that made the poem look all purty and stuff?? i meant to say thank you, and i didnt...hugs and thank you (can i post more here??)...Dianna
 

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Hmmm .... yeah, sometimes it takes a pretty lady to make things look "all purty."

We appreciate all her efforts - your remark just gives us another opportunity to say "thanks." :)
 

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thank you Runner, and Risible, was that you that made the poem look all purty and stuff?? i meant to say thank you, and i didnt...hugs and thank you (can i post more here??)...Dianna
Hmmm .... yeah, sometimes it takes a pretty lady to make things look "all purty."

We appreciate all her efforts - your remark just gives us another opportunity to say "thanks." :)
Oh, thanks, kids! :blush:

Di, O reminded me to format your poem and migrate it to Recent Additions so it will get the full adulation it deserves! :bow:

Oh, and we're all about "more" here in the Library!

:kiss2:
 

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wanted to rep but im out of it again...
this was lovely.
kudos... very beautiful.:happy:
 
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