Maid of Honour by Berry (~BBW, Magic, Weight Switching, ~MWG)

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  1. Jan 26, 2013 #21

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    Anne was exhausted by the time she reached the mall. At her former weight she would take pleasure in walking to the mall, grateful that she lived within walking distance to the complex. This time, however, Anne had opted for the bus - too lazy and out of shape to even get a small amount of exercise. Not that the bus had been pleasant... the cramped conditions and Anne's bulk had created a humiliating and uncomfortable experience.
    I need to learn to drive... Anne sighed.

    Realising that she still had a good 10 minutes until Kate would arrive, Anne gave into her desire and headed straight for the food court before realising where her new "instinct" had taken her.

    I'll order something small, I really need to start my diet.

    Unfortunately for Anne, a small pang of pain - that was becoming all too familiar - spread from her stomach reminding her of how much space there was to fill now.

    Another day can't possibly hurt.

    Oblivious to her extreme lack of will power and motivation, Anne picked an extra large meal and demolished it - all the while telling herself it wouldn't affect her widening waistline.

    Anne's phone began to ring as she threw away her rubbish. Noticing the caller ID, she proceeded to answer.

    "Hey Kate!" Anne said, anxious to get the whole trip over with - she didn't like being out in public if she could help it.

    "Hey Anne! Meet me in the food court, I'm there now!"

    Looking around, Anne noticed Kate on the opposite side.

    "I see you - look I'm waving."

    After getting Kate's attention the walked towards each other and hugged briefly.

    Wow, she looks great! Anne thought to herself.

    While Anne had been as lazy as possible over the last month, Kate had dine the complete opposite and you could see it. Kate looked to have dropped a few pounds and she glowed with confidence.

    "It's been a while! You've been blowing me off all month!" Kate said, smiling.

    "No-no. I've just been super busy, I-"

    "I'm only joking! Anyway let's get some lunch and catch up."

    As the two women walked towards the counter to order, it never once occurred to Anne to decline the second lunch.
     
  2. Jan 26, 2013 #22

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    I've neglected this story but I got a job and never expected to be so busy! I had a definite idea of where I wanted this story to go and I'll try and get to writing it again.

    I'll try and get this written but no promises, thanks for the post - it's nice to know people are still interested in this one.
     
  3. Jan 26, 2013 #23

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    I really like this story but feel sad for here not being happy with her body it reminds me of me an my bestie she wants to lose weiht so bad an i love the trill of gaining.
     
  4. Jan 27, 2013 #24

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    It's cool I'm glad you are still here with us. I really dig the switching weights idea and I wish there were more stories like this on the forum. I have always been a fan of the medallion of zulo stories and this reminded me of that premise but with the added bonus of bbw.
     
  5. Jan 27, 2013 #25

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    I'm always excited when I see this story gets a bump. I hope you get a chance to finish it!
     
  6. Jan 30, 2013 #26

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    Yay, more of this awesome story! Well done!
     
  7. Feb 9, 2013 #27

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    more please
     
  8. Feb 11, 2013 #28

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    Would it be crude to say I got a bit excited reading this?
     
  9. Feb 12, 2013 #29

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    I thought that was the whole point
     
  10. Mar 5, 2013 #30

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    This is such a great story! I'm really looking forward to the next part!
     
  11. Mar 7, 2013 #31

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    Please don't let this die
     
  12. Jan 13, 2014 #32

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    Ever finish this story?
     
  13. Jan 27, 2014 #33

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    This story goes so well, it's such a great story, but we may never know how it will end. It reminds me of the arrangement. I want to see it completed, but I don't want it rushed. sigh...
     
  14. Feb 3, 2014 #34

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    Guys, it's been over a year, let it die.
     

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