Need an editor for a few new stories

[Philled Up]

I was cleaning up an old computer and found a few unfinished stories. My stories have a tendency to be more like WG novelas and I could use some help editing them, primarily for typos, gramatical errors and to make sure all the numbers make sense. The first story is a 15 pager called "R.A.'s" It is about 2 Resident Advisors in a college freshman dorm expanding the minds (and waist lines) of two freshman girls. The second is a story I've worked on in spurts over 2 years called The Waterpark. Parts 1, 2 and 3 were posted on this site, but I needed to rework these parts so that fit in smoothly with parts 4, 5, 6, 7 and 8. The new chapters are a little more "plotty" than the first 2 and I could use some help on these chapters as well.

If you've got the time, creativity, grammar skills, and interest, let me know and I'll send you the Word docs.

Thanks,
Philled up

 

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