Nerdy Girlfriend - by Ghostly-Spectre (~~WG, Magic)

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    ~~WG, Magic - A nerd who lusts after a cheerleader gets a little help from his friend.

    Nerdy Girlfriend
    By Ghostly-Spectre


    Chapter One: The Wish

    Alan and Tom were college roommates and best friends, and they were nerds. Not just run of the mill nerds, but full blown, Star Trek convention attending, computer addicted, chess mastering, Dungeons and Dragons playing nerds. The two young men were quite similar, with only one real difference defining them – their opinion of the most popular girl in school, Michelle.

    This important distinction was very important when Tom and Alan ran into Michelle. She was the captain of their college’s cheerleading squad, and deserved that title in every respect. She possessed a stunning quantity of traditionally defined beauty, she was a skilled acrobat, and she was haughty and pretentious enough to feel genuinely at home atop the proverbial social ladder. She had short, well coifed hair, a slightly tanned and flawless complexion, an extremely slender physique.

    Alan was quite smitten with her. From the moment he first saw her, he felt consumed with infatuation. He even had once hid under the bleachers and secretly watched her during cheerleading practice. He desperately desired Michelle to be his, and lamented this desire’s impossibility to Tom often.

    Tom wasn’t at all interested in Michelle – how could he be? Tom felt that since she had nothing in common with him, there was no real attraction. And likewise, Michelle wasn’t at all interested in Alan. The few times they had bumped into each other, Michelle refused to even speak to him. She walked right past him as if he didn’t even exist.

    Tom was a good friend, and while he understood that Alan’s motives for wanting Michelle were skewed, he felt sympathetic to his buddy and decided to help.

    He decided to do some online research to see what he how he could help Alan. In no time, he had found exactly the guide he needed.

    “Let me see,” Tom said, studying the list he had found…I’m not a magical practitioner, I’m not a scientist with access to funny chemical compounds…aha! Rule nine…” Tom started. “Law of wish realization inevitability – any wish made by anyone anywhere will be inevitably granted.”

    “I wish for Michelle to become the kind of girl that would fall in love with…a nerdy guy like Alan.” Tom head a knock on the door, and half expected that there’d be a sudden poof, or the room would spin, and he’d suddenly come face to face with his best friend making out with Michelle. But he saw nothing. The knock repeated itself, and Tom finally got around to answering it.

    “Hey Tom,” Alan said as he entered the apartment. “Whatcha up to?”

    “Eh, nothing much,” Tom replied. “Nothing much at all...”

    Chapter Two: The Perfect Girlfriend

    After a few more minutes of chatting with Alan, Tom had decided that the whole wish thing was rubbish. He felt embarrassed at having even looked up such a facile solution to his friend’s problem. As the two played D & D, Tom tried once again to explain to Alan why he saw dating differently.

    “Isn’t this the best?” Tom opined with a certain degree of vagueness in his slightly nasal tone of voice.

    “The best what? Game?” Alan squeaked in his high pitched voice. “Well, there’s chess, Magic the Gathering, World of Warcraft…maybe this is in the top 5…” Alan’s voice trailed off as he mentioned still more games.

    “No, I meant playing games in general.” Tom clarified.

    “Well, of course.” Alan replied.

    “Well, wouldn’t you want your perfect girlfriend to be able to sit down and join us?” Tom asked, getting to his point.

    “Why would Michelle be interested in D & D? She’s a cheerleader.” Alan responded with confusion.

    “No, not Michelle, I mean, a perfect hypothetical girlfriend. I mean, as if you had designed her to be whatever you wanted. Wouldn’t you want her to enjoy doing the things you enjoy?”

    “Well…maybe,” Alan hedged. “But I don’t know if that’s sustainable. How many supermodels do you know that play role playing games?”

    “We’re talking hypothetically here, Alan. You can make anyone like anything you want.” Tom reminded him.

    “I know, but you’re missing the broader context, Tom. What hot chick would choose to continue to keep playing games in the basement with nerds, even if that was her highest ambition? There’s just so many social and financial rewards for other behaviors. Becoming a cheerleader, a model, making friends with the popular people…how is she going to resist that forever?” Alan asked, with a sense of triumph.

    “What about you? I don’t see you running off to join the football team to impress Michelle and join that popular world.” Tom countered.

    “Well, that’s not exactly a workable option for us, Tom. We were given the gifts of brains, not brawn,” Alan replied.

    “Well, you aren’t going to get an argument from me on that one,” Tom conceded, and the two chortled in laughter for a few moments.

    Chapter Three: The Game

    After failing to convince his friend to change his standards, he figured that Alan’s loneliness was just going to be a permanent fixture of their lives. He was therefore quite surprised when their lunchtime chess game was interrupted by a most unexpected guest.

    “1.e4,” Tom announced in chess notation as he made the first move of the game.

    “…c6” Alan replied as he entered his favorite chess opening, the Caro-Kann

    “2.e4” Tom responded quickly, and Alan moved “2…d5” just as quickly. Tom thought about his next move for a while, and then made his decision. “3.f3”

    “What the heck is that?” Alan quipped, “You’ve never played that before.”

    “It’s called the fantasy variation,” Tom responded. “I read an…interesting story online that introduced me to…to...” He stopped speaking as he looked over Alan’s shoulder. Michelle was walking over to their table! “Muh, muh…” Tom stuttered, unable to finish speaking the name of Alan’s crush.

    “Don’t mind me,” Michelle began, “This game looks interesting, mind if I watch?”

    “Go right ahead,” Alan squeaked, and she pulled up a chair and stared at the board intently.

    The next few dozen moves of the game didn’t go well for Alan. Though usually a solid player, he floundered around the board, his pieces taking inactive positions. Tom credited his superior less to the Fantasy Variation and more to Alan’s inability to keep his eyes on the board, with Michelle sitting right next to him.

    Tom could tell that Alan was close to resigning. After another attacking move, Tom felt as though victory was inevitable. He saw Alan’s hand drift towards his King, ready to tip it over in resignation. Before he reached it, however, it was stopped by Michelle’s.

    For a brief moment, their hands hesitated, lingering over the board. After a poignant silence, Michelle finally spoke: “May I?” she asked.

    “Uh…sure,” Alan responded at least, not quite sure what Michelle was asking but confident enough that his answer would be yes in just about every case. Michelle reached for Alan’s Queen and moved it directly into the path of Tom’s pawns.

    “Michelle, I…you…uh…” Alan was unable to formulate his words, trying to explain that she was giving away his Queen in a hopeless position. Tom, however, saw the position for what it was and smacked himself on the forehead. How could he have missed this?

    “It’s a draw!” Michelle exclaimed. “Stalemate. If he captures your Queen, you have no legal moves and the game’s tied. But if he doesn’t capture, you’ll just put him in check and force him to capture next turn. You’ve secured the draw in worse position.” It was truly a brilliant maneuver, and Tom was less upset at Michelle for telling Alan about it than he was upset at himself for not having anticipated it himself.

    “Well lunch is already over, catch you guys later,” Michelle said, as she scampered off towards her table. Alan was too stunned to reply; he simply sat there, his jaw slack with incredulity.

    Chapter Four: The Invitation

    At first, Tom and Alan didn’t know what to make of Michelle’s strange behavior. There wasn’t a logical explanation.

    “She couldn’t be an expert chess player…” Alan whispered to Tom during science lecture.

    “But, it’s equally unlikely that any novice would have seen that move.” Tom whispered back.

    “Well, if she was just having fun with us, why would she have suddenly become so into the game? And how would she know an opportunity like that would come up?” Alan inquired. Tom had an answer prickling in the back of his mind, but he didn’t allow himself to consider it. That just couldn’t be the answer…could it?

    The two didn’t have to wait too long before seeing Michelle again. At the end the day, they literally bumped into her in the hall. Alan was surprised to actually hear her apologize and even helped pick up some papers that had fallen in their little collision.

    “Hey, what are you doing this afternoon?” Michelle asked the still stunned nerd duo.

    “Uh, well, um…” Alan squeaked, desperately trying to come up with something more impressive sounding than what was occurring. Tom, on the other hand, had a funny feeling that the truth was exactly what Michelle wanted to hear.

    “Playing D & D, or maybe Magic the Gathering, why?” Tom asked. Alan scowled, subtly tried to nudge him. His eyes seemed to say “Hey Tom, you don’t want her to think we’re a bunch of nerds, do you?”

    “Ooh, sounds cool. Mind if I come?” Michelle asked as she batted her mascara-filled eyelashes. Alan was again rendered speechless, and so it fell to Tom to answer. He was still a bit skeptical.

    “Don’t you have cheerleader practice today?” Tom asked, slightly raising an eyebrow.

    “Eh, well, yeah. I mean…” It was Michelle who now seemed to have trouble speaking clearly. “Well, I do, yes. But I’m ditching it. One day won’t kill the squad, right?”

    Tom nodded approvingly. “Of course. We’d love to have you over to play some games.”

    Chapter Five: Dinner for Three

    Alan and Tom walked back to their apartment with a sense of disbelief: here it was, Friday night, and they were going to be playing their favorite games with the most popular girl in school. Alan was tripping over his feet (more so than usual) as they finally got to the apartment. Tom wasn’t sure which was more of a coincidence: the wish he had made yesterday or the hypothetical question he had posed to Alan last night.

    By the time they were setting up the D & D table, Alan’s nerves had finally calmed down. By the time they were creating the character sheets, it was obvious to both young men that something man than a radical change interests was happening to Michelle.

    “So, I’m guessing you want to be the elf, the lithe, thin, spritely race?” Alan asked, trying his best to say it flirtatiously.

    Michelle loudly – and uncharacteristically – combined a snort with a scoff. “Yeah, right. Why don’t I play the dwarf, short, shout, strong, hearty – and with a nice constitution bonus?”

    Neither Tom nor Alan was sure how to understand this remark. Had she really just shot down a comparison between her and a lovely elf in favor of one between her and a homely dwarf? Or had she only suggested that she play the dwarf to create as much contrast between herself and her role-playing alter ego as possible? Or had she just wanted the character’s constitution bonus? And how in the world did someone playing this game for the first time know that dwarves receive that bonus anyway?

    No answers became apparent, and the game continued. Michelle continued to display traits that made it seem as though she never was a cheerleader. Upon sitting down, she didn’t hold herself with great poise and grace, as Alan had often observed her do during English class. Instead, she simply flopped down, slouching a little bit against the couch, which made her look shorter and more casual. When Tom made nerdy puns about rules in the game, she laughed a big, bellowing, dorky, unladylike laugh.

    The hours flew by and soon it was evening. “What’s for dinner around here?” Michelle asked, rubbing her flat tummy. “I’m starving.”

    “I don’t know…maybe we can get pizza?” Alan asked. Michelle brightened up.

    “Great idea! Let’s try ordering it online!” Michelle exclaimed. Tom merely shrugged and pulled out his laptop.

    “What’s this article here, ‘How to eat an entire pizza in one sitting?’” Michelle asked, pointing to an online tab saved from his last browsing session. Tom stammered for a minute and took back his laptop, and then Michelle continued. “Looks totally neat, I want to give that a try. Let’s order two pizzas and see if I can pull this off…” Alan looked a little bit taken aback, but Tom’s eyes widened. He unconsciously licked his lips as he imagined Michelle stuffing her face with slice after slice of pizza.

    “Stop that,” he mentally scolded himself. “She’s for your friend, remember?”

    When the pizza arrived, the boys were surprised to see Michelle answer the door and take care of the pizza tab.

    “You didn’t have to do that, Michelle,” Tom said.

    “Well, it’s the least I can do, given that you’ve both taught me to play some awesome games. Plus – I plan to eat more pizza than both you scrawny guys put together!” Alan and Tom seriously doubted both of these claims. Michelle had picked up the rules to D & D quickly – too quickly. After just a few hours, she seemed to understand the very complex rules as well as Tom and himself. She had to already have known how to play, yet what was the possible incentive of lying? The pizza claim was also doubtful. How could a cheerleading captain really eat a whole pizza? Then again, she was skipping practice to hang out with them…

    Tom brought out some 2 liter sodas for them to drink, and Michelle greedily guzzled hers directly from the bottle. Afterwards, she let out a little burp, and then blushed.

    Michelle didn’t even bother using a paper plate. She simply dragged her pizza box over to where she was sitting and ate the pizza directly out of it. Before she ate, she pulled open as many of the little packets of red pepper and parmesan cheese as she could find and doused her pizza. She tore open one of the little packets a bit clumsily and cheese flew everywhere, creating a huge mess. Some landed on the carpet, and some landed on her clothes, and a few little crumbs landed on her chest and slightly exposed cleavage. She quickly grabbed a napkin and tried to clean everything up, blushing yet again.

    Tom noticed Alan looking at this spectacle with what appeared to be a mix of curiosity and revolution on his face. Tom was simply amused.

    Michelle began to chow down on her pieces of pizza in earnest. She took large bites, chewed noisily, and failed to catch dribbling grease from the slice more than a couple of times. She was cramming them down as she was starved, and as Tom gazed at her impossibly thin waistline, he guessed that she might as well have been.

    “Hey Tom?” Michelle asked, shaking him out of his staring.

    “Uh, yeah?” Tom replied.

    “Are you going to eat your crusts?”

    Chapter Six: The Transformation

    When Michelle excused herself to go to the bathroom, Tom and Alan had a chance to talk amongst themselves for the first time in hours.

    “Well, what do you think? Isn’t this the best day of your life?” Tom exclaimed excitedly.

    “Well, yeah…” Alan said reluctantly.

    “Well yeah, nothing! I thought she was totally out of your league, but every thing we do impresses her. She’s really the best of both words in the flesh.”

    “Yeah,” Alan agreed, again with a tone of reluctance in his voice. “I never really expected this, you know…that she’d be such a cool…buddy.”

    “What’s going on, Alan? Buddy? Buddy? This is Michelle you’re talking about. Are you blind?” Tom asked incredulously.

    “Well she is hot. But I don’t know – there’s just something wrong. I mean, how did she pick up chess and D & D that fast? And some of her mannerisms are so…not cheerleader. There’s just a really weird vibe going on for me, to be honest.” Alan said.

    Tom debated if explaining the wish he had made would offer clarification for his friend, or if it would just cause him to think Tom was nuts. Before he reached a decision, Michelle walked back in the room.

    Tom immediately noticed something different about her – but he couldn’t quite place it. After a few moments of impolite starting, he realized her hair had changed. The popular styling was gone and it was just sort of naturally hanging. It definitely went with the ultra-casual behaviors she had been exhibiting all evening.

    As the three resumed the game, other changes started become obvious as well. Michelle’s stomach, which was almost unnaturally flat at the start of the meal, had a definite curve to it now. Tom thought that this might be because of the amount of pizza she had stuffed down her maw, but as he studied her more intently, he began to notice other changes.

    Her arms had grown a bit. They were no longer twigs, but getting a bit bigger and huskier. They led up to a pair of slightly rounder and broader shoulders. Tom eyed her up and down and she looked as if she had put on 15 pounds since this afternoon.

    “Was this plumpers pizza?” He thought to himself. That just couldn’t be – could it?

    Michelle, still intently consuming her pizza, seemed totally oblivious to Tom’s staring, so he continued. She stuffed another piece of pizza into her mouth, and Tom could actually see her chest expand. Her breasts strained against her top and revealed a bit more cleavage. She took another bite, and Tom swore he could see her thighs broadening and her hips swelling in girth. He could tell her legs were becoming thick and juicy. Her tummy was starting to peek out from under her tight-fitting shirt. It’s swollen, round shape indicated a blossoming potbelly.

    “Will you excuse me?” Michelle started Tom yet again. “I should go take my contacts out, my eyes are starting to hurt.” She pulled herself up from her pizza feast and walked to the bathroom. Tom noticed her larger derriere and the fact that her walk now had a slight waddle to it.

    “I didn’t know she had contacts,” Alan said. Both he and Tom always wore glasses – and when Michelle exited the bathroom, so did she. Big, thick ones that put both Alan’s and Tom’s lenses to shame. And was it the dim light – or was her skin paler? It was as if the artificial tan had melted away and her natural, ultra-pale and creamy complexion was taking over.

    Tom noticed Shelly’s overall frame seemed to have expanded as well. She now had big shoulders and a broad back. Her breasts were now tantalizingly large and luscious, and even her face was chubby. She had puffy, apple cheeks which created cute dimples when she smiled, and a slightly double chin when she yawned.

    “Ok, where were we? Was my dwarf fighter going to attack?” Neither Tom nor Alan responded. Michelle’s voice had changed, too! It was now more nasal, and a bit more high pitched and squeaky.

    “We were going to rescue the princess from the dungeon, actually,” Tom finally replied.

    “Well I hope she’s ready for an amateur if she’s anything like sleeping beauty. I’ve never been kissed,” Michelle squealed.

    “Michelle, you’ve never been kissed?” Alan asked with disbelief.

    “Michelle, Michelle, I hate that name. Sounds so girly and lame. Call me Shelly.”

    “Shelly? Shelly?” Alan repeated with disdain.

    “Yeah, I like that much better. And to answer your question, yes I’ve never been kissed, Alan.” Michelle said, her eyes locking onto his.

    “I, well, me, me neither…” Alan stammered.

    “Well, maybe you could help remedy that, Alan…” And she leaned in towards him, puckering her lips like a 6th grader kissing on a dare. Alan stared at what his lovely Michelle had become. He was horrified.

    “Tom, I need to talk to you outside right now!” And with that, he ran out of the apartment and left Shelly kissing the air.

    Chapter Seven: Reevaluation

    After telling Shelly to sit tight for a moment, Tom reluctantly followed Alan outside. He found his friend bleary-eyed and close to tears.

    “What, what the hell is going on,” he wailed. “Are you seeing what I’m seeing, Tom? Tell me I’m not going crazy.”

    “Alan, I should have told you earlier. This is my fault entirely.” Tom admitted.

    “Your fault? What could have done?” Alan asked incredulously.

    “I…wished for it to happen,” Tom stated, realizing how silly it sounded.

    “You wished for my dream girl to be reduced to…to…” Alan stammered. “You wished for my dream girl to be ruined like this right in front of me? Is this some kind of payback for your hypothetical yesterday or something?”

    “No! It’s not like that. I made the wish before that talk with you. I wished for her to become the kind of girl who would fall for you,” Tom replied defensively.

    “That’s for the insult, Tom. You think that,” Alan snarled out the last word as he pointed to the apartment, “is the only kind of girl who’d ever fall for a geek like me?”

    “No, Alan, listen. I just wished that she’d be the kind of girl that would fall for you. I never thought she’d change in that way. This is all happening out of my control.” Tom explained.

    “And what do you mean you ‘wished’ this? How would that do anything, Tom?” Alan asked accusingly.

    “It’s hard to explain, Alan. Let’s just say there are many things you don’t understand.” Tom said indelicately.

    “What don’t I understand?” Alan asked.

    “For starters, what’s wrong with Michelle, err…Shelly? You were just saying a while ago what a cool buddy she was.” Tom countered.

    “That’s my whole point, Tom! She’s like some girl we’d meet at a Star Trek convention now.” Alan said with disgust.

    “What’s wrong with that?” Tom asked sheepishly.

    “What’s wrong with that? Michelle was the cheerleading captain. Just think of what people would say if a guy like me was walking around with someone like her. Now she’s ruined.” Alan lamented.

    “So that’s what this is all about, huh? What other people think and say about us? Let it go, Alan. They don’t matter.”

    “It matters! It matters!” Alan insisted. “Haven’t you noticed how unpopular we are? Besides, Michelle was beautiful. Why’d that have to change? Why can’t you wish her back to the way she was?” Alan demanded.

    “Because you were right last night, Alan, although I hate to admit it. A cheerleader isn’t going to just become a dork for no reason. Everything in life is about incentives, real or imagined. There’s just no incentive for Michelle, as she was, to change only her habits but not her appearance. And besides, who says that Michelle was more beautiful than Shelly?”

    “I do, and so would every other sane person in the galaxy.” Alan retorted.

    “There you go again with the other people’s opinions thing. Do you really know what you find beautiful in a woman, Alan? Have you really thought about where your opinions come from? Have you considered if you really do feel this way or if you’re just reflecting the views of everyone else?”

    “So what if I am, that doesn’t make the feelings less real.” Alan replied defensively.

    “No, it doesn’t, but that’s how we’re treated, Alan. We’re looked down upon because of commonly held prejudices. Do people learn to play chess before they criticize us ‘eggheads’ for playing? Do they learn how to build a chemistry set before they worship at the foot of the quarterback? Of course not. We are mocked and teased for no reason other than our interests and our looks are unfashionable. Just like Shelly is now. Would you really want to treat her the way other people have treated us?” Tom spoke with a sense of urgency. He felt as though he had finally understood this entire evening’s meaning.

    “That’s really nice of you Tom, but come on. Haven’t you ever dreamed of becoming a millionaire and getting a trophy wife? Haven’t you ever wanted to become something other than a reject?” Alan pleaded desperately.

    “No, I don’t. I want someone who has a lot in common with me. I want a woman that can understand me, Tom. Some skinny gold digger who’s only attracted to me for my money couldn’t ever have a meaningful relationship with me. And besides I’m happy with myself. Don’t you think…” But Tom was cut off.

    “No, I don’t think, that, whatever it is you’re about to say. I can’t accept what you’ve done to Michelle. Change her back, it isn’t right.”

    “Why? She’d just go back to ignoring you.” Tom said.

    “I don’t want to debate us anymore, Tom, this is about her. You don’t think she wants to be like this, would you?” Alan asked.

    “Well, I don’t know…” Tom said. “To be honest I hadn’t really thought of it from that angle. Well, why not? Would you really want to just turn into a pro football player if you could?” Tom replied.

    “Yes! Yes I would.” Alan started crying. “You’re right Tom, you’re right about everything. I do hate myself…”

    “Alan, I’m sorry…I wish you were a football player.” Tom said before he could stop himself.

    “What did you just say, Tom?” Alan asked in awe. Tom felt he might as well commit to it now.

    “I said I wish you were a football player. No, the best football player this school has ever seen!” Tom said.

    “Woah…I should get going to football practice then!” And with that, he ran off in direction of the school’s football field. As Tom looked at him disappearing into the distance, he suddenly had a revelation: he was possibly seeing his best friend disappear forever.
     
  2. Dec 23, 2010 #2

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    Chapter Eight: Discovery

    Tom initially tried to chase Alan down, to get him back, perhaps even to apologize. He felt bad about what he’d done, and he didn’t want to lose his friend. Unfortunately, Tom’s asthma caught up to him, and he was reduced to simply holding his sides and wheezing, with his friend far outdistancing him.

    When Tom finally got back to his apartment, he was surprised to see Shelly on his computer.

    “Tom, I hope you don’t mind. You and Alan were talking so loudly outside, I couldn’t help but hear you. I didn’t understand most of what you said – but it sounded serious. I had to try to figure out what’s really going on.”

    “And…?” Tom asked.

    “Well, again, I hope you don’t consider this an invasion of your privacy, but I looked through your browsing, history, and I think I get what was going on. This story, The Cheerleader, this describes what happened, right? A cheerleader changes into…someone like me?”

    “Yes, I suppose so,” Tom said reluctantly, feeling embarrassed and guilty. “I’m sorry.”

    “I really used to be a cheerleader?” Shelly asked with a tone of doubt in her voice.

    “Yes, of course. You’re captain of the squad,” Tom said.

    “How long ago was this?” Shelly asked to Tom’s amazement. Did she really not remember?

    “This afternoon,” Tom said. “All of these changes have happened over just a few hours.”

    “Tom, how is that possible? How could I have put on 80 pounds in a few hours? And I don’t know the first thing about cheerleading. I have Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings posters decorating my walls. I’m not a cheerleader…”

    “I don’t know what to say, Shelly. I’m sorry I wished for it. I feel terrible,” Tom lamented.

    “Alan must have liked the old me, and now he’s repulsed by me…as would any guy, I guess,” Shelly said. “Why do you even read these stories, Tom? Do you just like the idea of some smug hot chick getting her comeuppance?”

    “To be honest, Shelly, I do think there’s quite a lot of that among people that read these stories. But for me, I don’t really think of a transformation as a negative, as a punishment.” Tom explained.

    “What else could they be?” Shelley asked.

    “Well, I think Alan just had bad taste. Or more specifically, he has misplaced priorities. He cares more about impressing other people than being comfortable with himself.”

    “So what, Tom? So what?” Shelly squealed.

    Tom wasn’t quite sure how to explain why he read those stories. For a few moments he simply gazed at Shelly.

    “Didn’t you read anything else, Shelly? Did you read ‘Feel Beautiful as You Are?’ or ‘How to Appreciate Your Body and Love Yourself?” He gave her a few minutes to read the self-esteem articles, hoping the message would sink in as fast as everything else had changed.

    “Those are very nice,” Shelly said at last.

    “I could tell you that I actually think you’re beautiful right now, Shelly. I could tell you that in attempting to get Alan his perfect girlfriend, I’ve created my own instead. But that doesn’t matter, not really. You can’t just rely on me to understand who you are or are or create a sense of self worth. It has to come from within.”

    “I know, Tom,” Shelly whispered.

    “And, I want to give you the opportunity to change back. I think I inadvertently changed Alan. I can change you too. You could go get Alan to love you again – I’m sure he’s Michelle’s type now. You could get just about any guy to love you as Michelle.”

    “But not you,” Shelly said in a low voice.

    “Well, I think you’re perfect just as you are now, but it’s your choice. It was wrong of me to alter your whole life just because I wanted to help a friend, it’s only fair that I give you the chance to change it back now.”

    Shelly scooted her plump body a little closer to Tom. “That’s so sweet. It means the world to me that you’d give me the choice.” Shelly surprised Tom by wrapping her husky arms around his thin frame and giving it a mighty squeeze.

    For a few moments, the two simply held each other, taking in the emotions of the evening. Finally, Shelly leaned into Tom’s ear and whispered: “I want to keep playing nerdy games. I want to go out with you and for everyone to think we’re such a nerdy couple. I want to eat dessert when I go to a restaurant. I want – no, I wish – for things to be just like this.”

    With that, Shelly leaned into Tom and the two kissed. Tom ran his hands down Shelly’s chubby cheeks and then down her love-handled waist. Tom tried to hold and appreciate her every delicious curve. He felt her arms hug him so tight and her heavy body pin him against the wall so hard that he could barely breathe. Her tongue eagerly delved into his mouth, flailing about with both inexperience and eagerness.

    When the two finally broke the kiss, they were both gasping and giggling eagerly. After a long silence, Shelly finally said “Besides, you can’t really wish me back.”

    “Why couldn’t I, I wished for Alan…” Shelly cut him off.

    “Well, you have no way knowing if that wish really worked,” Shelly countered.

    “True,” Tom conceded. Apparently his logic and way of debating had impacted Shelly as well.

    “But I was referring to law 48, of course,” Shelly said.

    “Law 48?” Tom asked.

    “Yeah, ‘While it is possible under certain rare circumstances to reverse WG, it is not possible to do so before the woman has grown to at least 180 pounds in size, nor is it possible to get her below this point,’ from the rules of weight gain. You didn’t remember that one?” Shelly asked.

    “No, I guess not,” Tom replied sheepishly.

    “Honestly, Tom, if your entire story of what happened to me rests on law 9 of that list, I’d really recommend that you keep the rest of them in mind.”

    “Ok, will do…” Tom said, and leaned in to kiss Shelly again.
     
  3. Dec 24, 2010 #3

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    Really cute story.
     
  4. Dec 24, 2010 #4

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    I'm not sure if you're done but this is REALLY GOOD! I liked it a lot. Is there more in store?
     
  5. Dec 24, 2010 #5

    Ghostly-Spectre

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    Yes this story is just about finished, I think.

    If anybody else has any requests, I'm open to new ideas for writing my next story.

    On an unrelated note, I forgot to include my tags (WG) in subject titles....is there some way to edit that? Or if an admin is reading this, can you edit it in there for me? Thank you so much. There WAS an edit button on my post but after i used to to make a minor edit it vanished.
     
  6. Dec 25, 2010 #6

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    I love when fantasy collides with realism
     
  7. Dec 25, 2010 #7

    IrishBard

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    womble/leprechaun hybrid!

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    This story was great. apart from anything else, This kind of speaks to me on a personal level alot of the time.

    hopefully, Alan figures life out for himself. but at least Tom and shelly are happy together.
     
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  8. Dec 28, 2010 #8

    BTB

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    As the Author of the Laws of Weight gain I have to applaud you for writing such a beautiful story that puts Fat Admirance, Nerddom and Romance together. It is a fun read and a fine piece of Story you did.
     
  9. Dec 29, 2010 #9

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    Nice story!

    In no way is sacrifice of the queen to reach stalemate a brilliant maneuver tthough. Pretty much basic.
     
  10. Jan 17, 2011 #10

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    I've been on break from reading WG fiction for a while, and I came back just in time to find this gem. Wow!

    I love the interaction between Tom, Alan, and Shelly. Reminds me of Big Bang Theory.
     

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