speaking of length, I think this needs a little more. (or is there a sequel?). What curse? How do they break the curse? Does Fenri get fatter? How does Ademar adjust to life in a fat body? Does Fenri "take a hike" when Ademar and G do the nasty? (and vice versa?) How does G feel about fat on fat sex?
So many questions!
I am so sorry for the delay! Yes, this story isn't done. Life has just sucked the life literally out of me! I have a distinct plan where I want this story to go, and I've started drafting it out. It just may be a bit slower as I don't want to ruin it by rushing through it!