As someone who enjoys writing weight gain/expansion fiction in their spare time I love it when people really like my stories.
However in order to improve my story telling i would love to hear from people what are some of your pet-peeves when it comes to reading stories.
Ill start it off with some of my own (a few of which i am guilty off myself) :doh:
No proper/accurate classification given to story ie (BBW, XWG REVENGE)
No short run down of what the stories about.
Story isn't finished >_<
Weight gain is too slow or too fast.
Story is more about love/romance/mystery/whatever then actual weight gain fiction. The weight gain seems to be just a side note almost.
I love original ideas and settings
Love description of size and weights (adjectives are our friend)
Got any others?
However in order to improve my story telling i would love to hear from people what are some of your pet-peeves when it comes to reading stories.
Ill start it off with some of my own (a few of which i am guilty off myself) :doh:
No proper/accurate classification given to story ie (BBW, XWG REVENGE)
No short run down of what the stories about.
Story isn't finished >_<
Weight gain is too slow or too fast.
Story is more about love/romance/mystery/whatever then actual weight gain fiction. The weight gain seems to be just a side note almost.
I love original ideas and settings
Love description of size and weights (adjectives are our friend)
Got any others?
