Matt,
I liked TNFG so I went to your site and read all of your other stories. Please keep up the great work! I compare you as an author to Admirer, HG, and TR all personal favorites from Dimensions.
I thought more about what I like about your stories and other BBW WG stories. I wonder what other people on the site would think about this...
Like most FAs, I love hearing a lot of physical details about a BBWs body, as well as the way she moves and how all of that changes as she gets plumper. But I usually prefer realistic descriptions of a womans filling-out rather than the fantastical.
Realistic story points would include:
- How she gains over realistic periods of time. In other words, gaining over days/weeks/months/years, NOT instant inflating.
- A realistic weight start and finish. Starting out thin/average (110-130) or even chubby (145-160lbs) and gaining to, say, 250-350lbs sometimes women grow even bigger but then it starts to seem less real for some reason.
- Her reasons for gaining -- either intentional or not
- Descriptions of her mindset before/during/after the initial gaining process (i.e. acceptance or even enjoyment in being a BBW)
- Its also nice to hear about how her relationships with men change during the gaining process
Heres some unsolicited feedback for you, Matt
Like I said, I read all of your stories posted on your site. Ive read thousands of WG stories over the years and feel Im in a reasonably good position to comment on these things.
I mostly appreciated the consistency of your stories.
I noticed that you usually used a similar device to explain the initial gain the Leah or Neala characters use of magic powers. I didnt mind that so much because after inciting the gain, the gain took on its own more realistic momentum. But I also noticed you had at least one or two stories (such as Destiny) that did not rely on magic. Even though it had fewer physical descriptions, I preferred that.
Your characters seem to usually start out vain/conceited and then take on better attitudes as they gain. I didnt mind that although it became a bit repetitive. There were a few other traits that showed up repeatedly in most of the stories but I didnt mind as I said, consistency is not a bad thing.
I hope it doesnt make me too much of a jerk for asking, but Id love to see you work on more stories (short, medium, or long, doesnt matter) that have less magic and the same if not more realism, and slightly more physical descriptions (of both the girls bodies and how they move, i.e. waddling/rippling/jiggling) .that would really make me smile.
Whew! Please excuse the length of the post but you inspired me!! Again, great work, I know it takes time and I appreciate your commitment to it.
Thanks much,
mark
I liked TNFG so I went to your site and read all of your other stories. Please keep up the great work! I compare you as an author to Admirer, HG, and TR all personal favorites from Dimensions.
I thought more about what I like about your stories and other BBW WG stories. I wonder what other people on the site would think about this...
Like most FAs, I love hearing a lot of physical details about a BBWs body, as well as the way she moves and how all of that changes as she gets plumper. But I usually prefer realistic descriptions of a womans filling-out rather than the fantastical.
Realistic story points would include:
- How she gains over realistic periods of time. In other words, gaining over days/weeks/months/years, NOT instant inflating.
- A realistic weight start and finish. Starting out thin/average (110-130) or even chubby (145-160lbs) and gaining to, say, 250-350lbs sometimes women grow even bigger but then it starts to seem less real for some reason.
- Her reasons for gaining -- either intentional or not
- Descriptions of her mindset before/during/after the initial gaining process (i.e. acceptance or even enjoyment in being a BBW)
- Its also nice to hear about how her relationships with men change during the gaining process
Heres some unsolicited feedback for you, Matt
Like I said, I read all of your stories posted on your site. Ive read thousands of WG stories over the years and feel Im in a reasonably good position to comment on these things.
I mostly appreciated the consistency of your stories.
I noticed that you usually used a similar device to explain the initial gain the Leah or Neala characters use of magic powers. I didnt mind that so much because after inciting the gain, the gain took on its own more realistic momentum. But I also noticed you had at least one or two stories (such as Destiny) that did not rely on magic. Even though it had fewer physical descriptions, I preferred that.
Your characters seem to usually start out vain/conceited and then take on better attitudes as they gain. I didnt mind that although it became a bit repetitive. There were a few other traits that showed up repeatedly in most of the stories but I didnt mind as I said, consistency is not a bad thing.
I hope it doesnt make me too much of a jerk for asking, but Id love to see you work on more stories (short, medium, or long, doesnt matter) that have less magic and the same if not more realism, and slightly more physical descriptions (of both the girls bodies and how they move, i.e. waddling/rippling/jiggling) .that would really make me smile.
Whew! Please excuse the length of the post but you inspired me!! Again, great work, I know it takes time and I appreciate your commitment to it.
Thanks much,
mark
