Forgotten_Futures
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[NOTE: This post and those which follow were originally appended to one of the stories (Being Curious - click here) but diverged enough from any relavance thereto that I thought it better belonged here -- Onserver)
I admit I typically avoid/ignore stories with a lot of spelling and grammar errors... I read a LOT so those two things actually tend to offend me, really, I hate it when I find something minor in my own work...
But Observer's comment on this specific story made me sit through it... and that twist there really multiplied the eroticism many fold. Good work!
I admit I typically avoid/ignore stories with a lot of spelling and grammar errors... I read a LOT so those two things actually tend to offend me, really, I hate it when I find something minor in my own work...
But Observer's comment on this specific story made me sit through it... and that twist there really multiplied the eroticism many fold. Good work!
