BBW Planet XL - by Marlow

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camylarde

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So, the story is perfect. Has all the right development, dialogues, action, its fair share of surprises, mostly believable ones, and overall its very readable.

I like the supposedly future swearing - holy nebulas, holy stars etc... all kinds of remarks add spice to the story.

What I don't get though is whether there was an explanation why the planet exists in the first place, and how is it run. THat piece is surrounded by mystery, and since everything else fits and clicks into each other nicely, I feel like there should be an explanation what and why and how. Or did I miss something? Aliens eaten by the squirmers... thats all I recall... Also, not sure how palace of plenty should get a universal rule over galaxy to the crazy scientist....

But even without these explanations, superb story.
My 2 cents.
 

Benny Mon

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Fantastic arc and wonderful characters - thanks so much for sharing this with us!
 
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