Story: "Infatuation" (part 1)

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Hello,

I've written the first part of a story which I posted a few days ago in "Library: Recent Additions", and I was wondering what people thought of it, as I haven't had any responses yet. I have posted this question here due to the gay relationship therein.

Thanks,
kamandi

 

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