BBW The Fence- by Polarisdreamer (~BBW, STUCKAGE, TEASING, ~SEX, STUFFING)

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  1. Jun 5, 2019 #21

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    Very nicely done & definitely leaves it open for a sequel.... :)
     
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  2. Jun 5, 2019 #22

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    Awesome! Thank you! I had fun with the clichés.

    Thank you! I'd be open to writing a sequel to this at some point in the future if people are interested. However, I'd need to brainstorm a good direction for the future of their story. Any ideas?
     
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    Ideas?
    Scott realizing the error of his ways and fights Trevor for Alana.
    Gotta love sibling rivalry.
    Alana enjoying being fat and Trevor being proud to be with a fat woman.
     
  4. Jun 5, 2019 #24

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    Enjoyable story! The characters had a realistic complexity around their bodies and emotions. Thanks!!
     
  5. Jun 5, 2019 #25

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    In terms of sequels, I could see one being many years later with Alana having gotten much bigger and Trevor having to navigate that. He is okay with her being 100lbs overweight, but navigating her being 200 or 300 pounds overweight might be a bridge too far—or is it? Or is it something he can learn to love or even enjoy? How would Alana navigate such serious consequences of her binge eating? It’s one thing to be stuck between the fenceposts, it’s another to be stuck in the gate itself...
     
  6. Jun 6, 2019 #26

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    Awesome really awesome. Would love to hear back from Noah... maybe college life and puppy love with Trevor adds weight, and she bumps into Noah again (either as a tease or if Trevor and her split and Noah is single) and Noah really fattens her up.
     
  7. Jun 7, 2019 #27

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    Great story. Are you not continuing Mia's Junior Year?
     
  8. Jun 8, 2019 #28

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    Hmm, sibling rivalry.. Interesting idea. A sequel would probably have to include Scott in some way. He's too important to both Alana and Trevor. I'm not sure Alana is the type to enjoy her fat, but I could see her enjoying that someone else enjoys it.

    I was going for a realistic feel. I am glad it came across! Thank you!

    I think you raise great questions. Depending on how big Alana let's herself get, it could pose a ton of possibilities for another story. I guess if I went in the direction your suggesting I could title the sequel "the gate" haha Thank you!

    It would be very interesting if Noah and Alana ran into each other again. The interaction would depend a lot upon what is going on with Alana and Trevor. But it is something to think about for sure. Great idea. Thank you!

    Thank you! I am continuing Mia's Junior Year. I'm working on the next three chapters of volume one this week and next week. Hopeful you'll start seeing some updates in the near future.
     
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    I really enjoyed that story, good job!
     
  10. Jul 21, 2019 #30

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    Thank you very much!
     

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