Roomie to Grow 1 - by Estrata (~BBW, ~BHM, Illustrated, Eating, ~XWG)

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Your artwork is terrific and so is the pacing. Please don't rush the story. I don't like "Freshman 50" as a title because it gives away the ending. I prefer a title that makes one guess about the ending. How about something like "Freshman Tempt-Taster" or "Freshman Temptation"?
 

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An excellent first installment.

Please continue with it.


Dennis

PS: Oddly enough, I was just at a local college yesterday for a small anime convention and spotted a girl who had your character, Casey's build: This girl was blonde but wore a very snug t-shirt (It looked like a Medium and she was easily an XL size) which showed off about 2-3 inches of bare belly hanging over her very tight jeans. She'd try tugging it down once or twice but it promptly rode back up again. Yes, cute kid and I found her oddly distracting for some reason. Hmmm...I wonder why (LOL!)
 

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Hmm... I like the idea of temptation. Or something about letting go.... I don't know, I never have such trouble thinking up titles. Hmm....

I know, I see girls like that at uni a lot. More power to them, says I! If I had a belly like that I would certainly show it off.

Thank you so much for all the interest and kind comments! I already have nearly 800 hits on the comic's website and I only set it up two days ago!

BTW, Episode Two is about halfway inked. :)
 

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I'm loving it! The way you use color is brilliant. I'll be checking your website for new additions.
Can't weight! (sorry couldn't resist that one)
 

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A very fine use of the manga style - definitely looking forward to further installments.
 

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Congratulations and welcome.

This kind of original work is what we had in mind in creating the Fine Arts forum - its great to see the new talent being expressed!
 

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I don't think it was going too fast at all. I think it's just the right pace. I'm intrigued though. You mentioned BHM? *looking forward to that!*
 

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Oh, yes. Lots of juicy BHMness coming. Probably in Episode Three. :)
 

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I love it. I love it so much. You are an extremely talented Manga artist, Laura, and this is a spectacular beginning. I hope to see our Protagonist slightly plumped by next issue.

Also...BHM in issue 3? Alright! I hope it's that guy from your first BHM art, he's cool.

As for a name, how about 'Roomies'? It's catchy, interesting, gives a nice feel...
 

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Ok, title idea. The Taste-Tester theme made me think of "Sweet Expectations." Or "Great Temptations." LOL, I guess they're both variants on the same theme, hehehe.
 

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estrata said:
Hmm... I like the idea of temptation. Or something about letting go.... I don't know, I never have such trouble thinking up titles. Hmm....

I know, I see girls like that at uni a lot. More power to them, says I! If I had a belly like that I would certainly show it off.

Thank you so much for all the interest and kind comments! I already have nearly 800 hits on the comic's website and I only set it up two days ago!

BTW, Episode Two is about halfway inked. :)

Oh, I totally find nice round bellies very appealing. I never got to see very many during my college/grad school days in the mid 1980s-early 1990s but it's gratifying to see so many more around now. I also enjoy how the young women appear to be perfectly happy to show it off in a tight top. In fact, just yesterday, I spotted another young lady walking down the street in a tight top with horizontal stripes which only served to make her abundant belly seem even rounder. ~Sigh!~ :p

Anyway, enough of my belly admiration...keep up the great work and I look forward to more.


Dennis
 

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Ohh, I like those. Great Temptations. Very clever.... Maybe better for a Victorian gaining story, but at the same time it has that whole coming of age thing. Or something. Hmmmmmmm.... :D

Looking for movies about college for title ideas, I found "Learning Curves". Not about BBWs, etc.. at all, but it's just seeping with innuendo! Hehe.

BTW, halfway done with coloring! :)

Edit: Think I'm going with Learning Curves. Thanks for the help, guys!
 

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awesome name laura. i'm checking the site everyday for updates :) I can't wait to see the next episode! -Max
 

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glad you came up with a title!

I can't wait for the next installment!
 

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