BHM His Student's Secret (~BHM, ~FFA, ~XWG, ~Romance)

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  1. May 31, 2019 #21

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    Thank you so much! :)
     
  2. May 31, 2019 #22

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    Thank you so much! Im a huge (pun intentional) fan of your stories as well. :)

    I can understand about the "XWG" part. The "supersized freakshow" stories have always turned me off (but to each their own). Im a hopeless romantic and a sucker for a good love story between an FFA and BHM. I think I labeled my story that way because Dakota was described as having gained a significant amount of weight in high school and then again as an adult.

    I was determined to write him well. After reading my initial story I felt like I had done his character wrong, so much so that it inspired me to come back to this story and retell it. He wasn't a likable character when I first wrote him; he was overemotional and didn't have much of a personality. I wanted to rewrite him as a BHM (and then SSBHM as an adult) who struggles with self esteem, however, comes out on top after working through his own issues and finding a partner who loves his body initially and when he gets fatter. I greatly enjoyed re-writing him as sweet, intelligent, funny, sarcastic and resilient, on top of being incredibly handsome ;)
     
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  3. Jun 3, 2019 #23

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    Just read this from start to finish. Very well written OP. Also, the Endgame spoiler was a nice touch!
     
  4. Jun 4, 2019 #24

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    Thank you so much!

    I started we-writing around the same time I watched Endgame. Im a big MCU nerd and was inspired a bit by fat, hippie Chris Hemsworth. I know he'll probably always be quite fit, but he would make an excellent BHM :)
     
  5. Jun 4, 2019 #25

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    I'm pretty sure someone might be working on a Fat Thor fic without us knowing
     
  6. Jun 4, 2019 #26

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    They might be, but they really should let us in the known once they finish ;)
     
  7. Jun 4, 2019 #27

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    Why wait for Fat Thor when there’s Volstagg?

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  9. Jun 11, 2019 #29

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    Wow, never heard of Volstagg before. Gotta do some research!
     
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  10. Jun 12, 2019 #30

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    This was so sweet!
     

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