Stages of Love - by tacofive (~BBW, ~XWG, Feeding)

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fatgirl33

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Really enjoyed this story, and the detailed descriptions over a long (and big!) transformation. Excellent writing!

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Brenda
 

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This is easily one of my favorite stories on here. I like how it is written, and it has great character development. Great Job!
 

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Lovely story: well-written, very sweet, with very likeable characters - and of course, quite arousing ^.^ Am a little confused, however, by Shannon being referred to as Gary's "wife" when they are not married at that point in the story. Perhaps in "...hoped that introducing their wives would ease the transition..." you could replace "wives" with "partners"?
 

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This was some excellent prose. You took the time necessary to build the characters up and you made the story believable while also staying true to the fantasy. Thank you.
 

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