Stages of Love - by tacofive (~BBW, ~XWG, Feeding)

Discussion in 'Special Interests Archive' started by tacofive, Jun 4, 2011.

  1. Jun 14, 2011 #21

    Blargface123

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    brilliant, dude.
     
  2. Jun 14, 2011 #22

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    awesome story
     
  3. Jun 15, 2011 #23

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    Really enjoyed this story, and the detailed descriptions over a long (and big!) transformation. Excellent writing!

    Thanks,
    Brenda
     
  4. Jul 9, 2011 #24

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    This is easily one of my favorite stories on here. I like how it is written, and it has great character development. Great Job!
     
  5. Jul 20, 2011 #25

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    Lovely story: well-written, very sweet, with very likeable characters - and of course, quite arousing ^.^ Am a little confused, however, by Shannon being referred to as Gary's "wife" when they are not married at that point in the story. Perhaps in "...hoped that introducing their wives would ease the transition..." you could replace "wives" with "partners"?
     
  6. Jul 12, 2012 #26

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    This hits the nail on the head for me! Great story.
     
  7. Jun 27, 2013 #27

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    Amazing story! I hope you write more! Very much enjoyed this.
     
  8. Jun 28, 2013 #28

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    This story is amazingly erotic!! Amazing!
     
  9. May 27, 2014 #29

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    This was some excellent prose. You took the time necessary to build the characters up and you made the story believable while also staying true to the fantasy. Thank you.
     
  10. Sep 14, 2018 at 4:41 AM #30

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    This story is well-written and very sexy. Excellent job.
     

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