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Here goes:

Fat Pigy Blowws Up!

I meet thir gril at the sore. She all realy fat! And Im like "i like wimmen with fat asses' and she's all ' i usta be all fat'

'n im like your a fat pig

nd i put a tube in hr mouth with like cream and wait gain shake
and she get s fater bnd fattet. and she's like ooh. lets have sex with me

and I dO and then shes like 687 pounds but the tube gets stuck and she blow up lik a balon!!!

she like 800 pounds and shes like

clall me a pIG

and she gets fater, and fater

and now shes 1765 pouns and we do iT a lot

(as fellow sufferers, pleez feel free to ad detales!_)


Bythe way: How does one get to the story library from the forim page?

Thnaks!

I Hpoe you like mi storee.
 

Wilson Barbers

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As the onetime Weight Room Librarian/Editor, I can attest that Admirer isn't much exaggerating.
 

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I would say that it is a child that wrote this story...or someone who is very child like, and I mean child as in no older than 6 or 7 years old...if not 5.
 

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I have seen worse and some of them even proper spelled. I remember one about a diner where the feedee became sick and died and was sold as sausages. It caused lots of protests and the poster claimed it was sent to him.
 

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BTB said:
I have seen worse and some of them even proper spelled. I remember one about a diner where the feedee became sick and died and was sold as sausages. It caused lots of protests and the poster claimed it was sent to him.
omg haha i'd like to read that hahhaah
 

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I saw a worse...

Hey, nice pic of Hugh Laurie, Australian Lord.

Anyway, I saw a worse story that was nothing but just numbers.

"232... 235... 238... 241.... 240... whoops, need more food..."
 

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admirer said:
Here goes:

Fat Pigy Blowws Up!

I meet thir gril at the sore. She all realy fat! And Im like "i like wimmen with fat asses' and she's all ' i usta be all fat'

'n im like your a fat pig

nd i put a tube in hr mouth with like cream and wait gain shake
and she get s fater bnd fattet. and she's like ooh. lets have sex with me

and I dO and then shes like 687 pounds but the tube gets stuck and she blow up lik a balon!!!

she like 800 pounds and shes like

clall me a pIG

and she gets fater, and fater

and now shes 1765 pouns and we do iT a lot

(as fellow sufferers, pleez feel free to ad detales!_)


Bythe way: How does one get to the story library from the forim page?

Thnaks!

I Hpoe you like mi storee.
Odd! Admirer's other posts weren't quite as grammatically crippled, perhaps some self medicating was involved? Stream of (un)consciousness prose?
 

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Weight related fiction, like music, is an art form - coming in various genres that appeal to different audiences.

Wilson B. is known for the Fat Majic series, my own are generally realistic gains with a plot twist or two, Swordfish writes novelettes and so it goes. We and others are all different, but we all, like fine musicians, have respect for our instrument - the pen.

Now its true that we may occasionally violate the rules of good grammer and language. When we do, however, its either an accidernt or for effect, not to mock or make fun of the craft that is our hobby. We respect one another's tastes - and those of our fans.

I know this post was meant to be humorous, but I also know how it might affect some readers. Knowing Admirer's talents and following I wish he had thought this one through a little further. It reminds me of the incident when Roxanne Barr cheapened her reputation by butchering the national anthem at a San Diego Padres baseball game.
 

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Phalloidium said:
Soylent Green is yummy.
But does it go with white or red wine? I'm guessing red, given the origins and the type of cut...
 

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I would think soylent green goes with a young nappa Pino Grigiot.

Personally I think if it was editted grammar and spelling, and the four or five pages that didn't make it into the post were re-added it wouldn't be that bad.
 

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This is the story mentioned above, I have to admit the meat of the feedee was only sold, not made into sausages. Memory is a tricky thing. On the bottom you can see some of the reactions the story caused.


The Fat Capture

There was a little building on the south end of town that looked perfect for the new clinic I wanted to start. I
went to the bank and took out a loan. I bought the building and started my new clinic. I didn't want anybody to know what the clinic really was, so I renamed it weight loss clinic. It took a week or so before I got about 4 clients. I got all of them into a weight reduction plan. I knew that if I got them to loose about 10 pounds I would have them locked in. It was about my first month and had a new bunch of women start. This was great, word got around town and i was making the money. Women were losing weight and their men were happy, which made them happy with themselves. I was a miracle worker in some eyes. My eyes saw something different.

Women lose weight, but they can gain it right back very quickly. I wanted to get my 4 most beautiful women, single women, to gain weight. But I had to close the shop down for that to happen...becuase this would be the perfect place to do this at because it has a basement.

Months went by and I pulled in the doe. I needed enough money to go a few months and to build a kitchen in the celler. I wanted to make sure no one had any idea I was going to close shop and supposely move to another town.

I finally decide to pick out my beauty in my litte crowd of fat women. I decided on Dawn, Kim, Sammantha and Patty. Dawn was about 340 pounds 5ft 5, and about 23 years old. Kim was smaller, she was about 250 and around 5ft tall, and was 25. Sammantha was a bigone, she was around 550, 5ft 5, and 40. Finally there was Patty. She is new to this program, because she never left the house becuase she was so big, she was 800 pounds and she is 5ft tall and she is only 19 years old. She was fed by her Grandmother that has lost her mind young, and always shoved food into her face. Now the trick was to get them to come by after hours, when it was dark. I decided to run a contest, I was going to pick our 4 women that have tried the hardest to lose the weight, not so much the actual losing, but the trying too. Of coarse the four I wanted won. The prise was a dinner out on me, and then to come back to my clinic for some drinks and stuff.

The night finally came, and since I was going to be carry around so much weight I decided to buy a moterhome. It would also be good if plans failed and I had to go out of town very quickly. I went to each of the houses and picked them up. We went to the The Cattle Steakhouse. We arrived and we got out and in we went.

They ate well because I told them that they deserve to get out and fill up, and I promised that I woud help them take off the weight. HA HA, I thought to myself no way........

We got back to the shop and they really ate well, my bill was over 500 dollars, and of coarse that included drinks and all. They were all drunk, and we got to the house and they were all complanng of there clothes to tight and their bellies hurtitn. I told them to unbutton their clothes that I wouldn't mind. They did and that was that. I got out a really nice bud and smoked it with them and then we had dessert. By then it was late and we were all downstairs watching tv. Patty called out and said she had to go home because she had to work in the moring, and after she did the others comments on their return to their homes. I knew that this was going to be the time where I must brake the news to these pretty ladies. So told them to have one more drink and I would take them home. But in this drink I stuck some roofies in them. After that all the women passed out within about an hour. No it was up to me to get the table up in the sound proof room I built. The tables I customly built they lay on their backs and their butt hung through the bottom hole so when they had to go the bathroom they could throught this tubing system. The talbles were very comfortable, becuase I wanted them to feel as comfortable as possible in this room, because I knew that this would be the something they would never forget.

I stripped off all of their clothes and put them on the tables and strapped them in. Kim woke first, and think she thought she was in a nightmare because she tried to be strong. She looked at me and asked where she was and was she dreaming. I said my dear you are in my feeding room. She did understand, so I told her that I am going to fatten her up, she screamed and the other awoke. Patty has some real health problems so I had to go to her first and give her a shot to calm her down. She was freaking out....fat was flying everywhere, finally she calmed down, and passed out. The other were screaming as well, so I gased them with laughing gas. They all started calming down. I waited for about an hours then I went back in and they were all calm. Patty was still sleeping I knew she would, with her weight an all she needs that rest becuase I would want to lose her this quickly.

I explained to all them that they will be my piggies and they could eaither fight it or just let it happen. Lots of confusion filled the room. Patty told me that she couldn't get any fatter, her doctor said it was not healthy because of her problems. I told her that I am aware of the problems, that is why you will be in a comfortable enviroment. Sammantha told me that she was in great danger as well. The others just sat in confusion. I said we can do this the hard way or the easy way. I told them the hard way would include you stuck in that chair with a feeding tube into your vein, or the easy way is to do what all of you like doing the best, and that is eat. I told them that I picked them because I knew their body stats and they were all perfect cannodates for weight gaining, I didn' t of coarse tell them the final step. All of them except Dawn agreed to eat food. Dawn said that she would rather die then to gain any of her weight back. So she got the tube and she didn't like it one bit.

I had to close the store and move the moterhome to make it look like I had moved on. I kept the building and I was going to lease it, but I made it very high to afford so nobody could afford the lease. The four went missing, and the papers dismissed it as they had left and moved on as well. Since they were fat, nobody paid them much mind. I fortunally took advantage of the situation.

Two months went by and I still had them down in the feeding room. I didn't expect to be this busy keeping them fed, so it took all my time. Dawn lasted about 1 week and then she finally gave in. There was so much more meat around now. They started to get used to the idea of being waited on and fed and all. They didn't understand my meaning of this. I didn't plan to tell them yet. I did tell them that in 4 months we would be taking a trip to my farm outside town. They wanted to know why, and I told them that we would relax eat and have fun, I told them that it could be their new home. They got exited when they heard that, because all of them had no direction in life, none of them had johs and they all lived off the government somehow. They did want to work, and that is why I think that they would like to do this so called experiment with me.

Another month passed and I decided to do the weigh in because I knew that all of them had gained a lot of weight. Patty had gained the most she was up to 900 pounds. Dawn went up to 420 and most of her gain was in her belly. Kim had went up to 300 and her gain was in her butt mostly, nice ham. Sammanth was up to 600, and her belly had become the most unsual shape.

They had all become feedee's, and they enjoyed their new size, and it seemed that all wanted to please me and get the biggest so I would like them more then the other. I was in heaven. They kept on going and they all decided to also go to the tube feeding of creams as well. I was fatting them all up very nicely, I was so proud of myself.

It was finally here, time to go to the farm outside of town. I told them all that I had to blind fold them because it was a suprise, and I got them all drunk and stoned out so there was no panic...I didn't want anything bad to happen yet.

We got there and all of them came into the old farm house. Patty asked where we were and I said about 100 miles from civilization. She got nevous and this time I was too late. She was over 1000 pounds and she she had a heart attack that killed her. The girls were shocked and that didn't know what to do. They all got scared and said that we should go back and they said that they promised not to say anything about what happened. I knew I could trust them at all, so each one of them got my special shot in their bottom to knock them out for a bit.

It was time to get the barn ready for my fat piggies. Each one of them got their own stalls and when they awoke the were all terified. They knew that they would not be getting out alive after their friend Patty had died. Patty was so big I need to get the tractor to pull her into the butchery that I built. I knew that the only way for me to dispose of her was to cook her. Saw I put her on a pole that had an engine on the one side to turn her around. She had so muchy meat on her, I couldn't believe it. her belly hanged down so far I had to rig the cooker hight so her belly wouldn't be the only thing that cooked on her. It took about 7 hours to fully cook her. Then I carved her up into filets. She was so so good. I had to but another freezer to keep her meat in.

The other women were at there end as well, they kept on eating but they knew that it was only time before they too would pass on to the other side. Each one gained about 200 more pounds before they passed on as well. I started a new shop, and it was a deli, and it was at the same little shop that I bought sometime ago, and everybody loved the meat there, and I wonder why?


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NEW: new feedee story comments (views: 190)
wonderer (24.28.55.4) -- June 13 2001, 20:55
NEW: Re: new feedee story comments (views: 52)
Soundless (24.216.110.15) -- June 13 2001, 21:22
NEW: Wondering... (views: 40)
Burghfa (64.12.105.39) -- June 13 2001, 22:10
NEW: Re: Wondering... (views: 34)
love to look (64.12.102.37) -- June 13 2001, 22:17
NEW: sick, sick, sick... ugh! *NM* (views: 24)
MissPiggySue (209.211.36.170) -- June 13 2001, 22:31
NEW: Ugh... ghghg... blechghg...... *NM* (views: 15)
SketchVG (198.81.16.27) -- June 13 2001, 23:12
NEW: Your story SUX and you need therapy NOW *NM* (views: 6)
Babe (205.188.192.158) -- June 14 2001, 02:15
NEW: A spell checker and therapy. (views: 2)
Tina (63.170.28.235) -- June 14 2001, 02:48
 

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