Hi everyone! I'm not sure exactly where I should post this request... but here seemed the most suitable place.
I'm in the middle of writing an erotic BBW romance story. I'd really like to find a few readers who could proof and check the story over as it is written, to make sure the writing is believable. It's in the erotic genre, but has no weight gain etc kind of material - the lead character just happens to be a BBW. (And a sexy one at that.) I'm looking for constructive criticism as the story progresses
If you're interested, here's one quick romance story I wrote for Amaze magazine:
http://www.venusimaging.com/Magazine/2005/augseppotential/rjastruc.htm
And a quick science fiction for Abyss & Apex:
http://www.abyssandapex.com/200607-LosHellas.html
to get an idea of my writing style.
If this request isn't okay, please do move it to where it would be okay... I've never really used teh story boards before (except, well, to read other fiction!)
I'm in the middle of writing an erotic BBW romance story. I'd really like to find a few readers who could proof and check the story over as it is written, to make sure the writing is believable. It's in the erotic genre, but has no weight gain etc kind of material - the lead character just happens to be a BBW. (And a sexy one at that.) I'm looking for constructive criticism as the story progresses
If you're interested, here's one quick romance story I wrote for Amaze magazine:
http://www.venusimaging.com/Magazine/2005/augseppotential/rjastruc.htm
And a quick science fiction for Abyss & Apex:
http://www.abyssandapex.com/200607-LosHellas.html
to get an idea of my writing style.
If this request isn't okay, please do move it to where it would be okay... I've never really used teh story boards before (except, well, to read other fiction!)
